I will perhaps read sway...just I'll read the last chapter first to make sure it's not a waste of my time. This could've been recommended if it had a sequel...just fruit for thought:)

I thought you said there was a sequel? Such a dissapointment it didn't end better. DOn't lie though to readers. It'd only be a Dr and Herm if the sequel was up and they ended together. I believe it's a Harry/ Herm, not Draco/ Herm... disappointment when writers lie to get reviews. I liked this story, until the end. Hour and a half I'll never get back — you're a good writer... you should write a sequel and end it better.

Don't EVER put authors notes IN THE MIDDLE OF A FUCKING SENTENCE! Never...you don't exist within the story so you should have nothing to say IN THE MIDDLE OF A SENTENCE. save your incessant babbling for before or after. Period. End of subject.

Doesn't really bode well when you make a note that there is sequel information. You have an unfinished story you wanted to drag out but yet finish. Bah

Where is the sequel? I loved this and I need to read the sequel.

This supposed to be a Dramione story! Not Hermione and Severus. It's DISGUSTING how he's hitting in her. He would never do that in the books, and I know the fact that it's Dramione it would already be OOC by default. But make it as believable as possible. As a reader it makes me uncomfortable seeing a professor hitting on Hermione SPECIALLY Snape. In the books (since you're obsessed with HBP or whatever) even though Snape is a half blood he still treated Hermione like shit.

I am liking this story so far. I do have to say that putting in author's notes inside the story is a bit annoying. Notes at the beginning and/or the end is fine. But leave the inside of thee story alone...it distracts from the story.

This story upset me deeply. The last few chpaters explained a lot. I wish it ended happily for Draco and Hermione though.

“I did forgive you,” She said. “But, I will never forget what you have done to me. Our relationship was built on one big lie. I don’t even know you, the real Draco Malfoy.”

Yes! Trust is important! Glad she chose Potter.

Haha, I know you wrote this story years ago. But I'm just now reading it.

I loved it, but the end was slightly shocking and upsetting...but I'm going on to the sequel now!

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whoa! your REALLY GOOD! i kno i havent submitted reviews before, but thats cuz i read in secret (parents want me to study) and i cant, but your an amazing writer, and honestly, your story is one of very few that i actually read to the last chapter; it doesnt have overly used matireal and it isnt just like every other dramione fic! anyway, dang ur good! srry, just so true! ok, thanks for wrighting, i really enjoyed it!

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No, I've read it. I get the storyline and all, I mean that I'm not sure where you're going to go with this story yet.

This story's plot was good. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, and I will definitely read the sequel. My only constructive criticism is work on grammar and spelling. Other than that, it was very enjoyable! Keep up the good work!

wow i really like this story its seems that you really do like that song sparks by coldplay. well i was trying to find it i swear its the only song by coldplay that i cant find anyways i was wondering if you had a site that had that song i wanna listen to it

Love your stories!