Good story but why does it say the spell “only needed a single witch” but then Chris promptly gets the power of three?

j'adore

Great story overall. It had engaging language, a good writing style, well described action, and a gentle plot. The falling action could've been better I think but that's only because its not really there; it goes from a heck of a lot of action-the climax/ peak of the storyto The End with no a lot of falling in between. So its more like jumping from a cliff (the peak) and going straight down in a 90 degree angle to the end instead of a falling decline kind if angle. But like I said it was still a gentle end, not too abrupt so overall you've done a great job here.

also it says that the vanquishing spell only needs a single witch. But then piper says its a power of 3 spell and Chris goes to get Paige etc.

in this chapter (9) it says Leo is holding Wyatt but just previously, Paige orbed Wyatt upstairs and Leo was still knocked out

jsyk there are no italics at all but I figured it out that it was Chris' memory of pipers funeral

aw phoebe! I hate when they do that, like why keep his identity a secret? I see why chris wants it to be a secret but Phoebe has absolutely zero reason for doing so

I always felt bad for Sigmund. I mean yeah he went along with the plan at first but when someone you look up to tells you something with such determination and confidence you start to believe it. And when he did try to break away from Gideon on the show and do the right thing, he lost his life in the process

are you planning a sequel for this one? I liked your story btw.

I enjoyed this very much.

Good Story, I like how Chris saves the day again

Nice Story, I like how Chris saves the day again

That was great! Just awesome! And very sad too. I don't really know why but I like Piper and Leo don't find out the truth about Chris.

Meÿli.

huh I wonder just what Chris will do... well nice story! :)

Great story! Poor Chris. You throughly whumped him!