Will you ever write any more to this story? :-3

Hiya,I really love this story!The plot is amazing and so is youe wrighting style!I know it's been like 4 years since you last updated but I really hope you update this story It's really great I can't wait to see what happins!

Also I would Love to help you with wrighting the lemmon scenes but I can't wright to save my life so sorry about that! I hope you update soon!

BYE BYE! ]

i liked it

i love the story

hope u update soon

sorry im not a writer

srry, wrong e-mail thing... i'm not use to this one yet. sorry.

well... good story so far. that's a hard one. nothing can ever be that perfect for THAT kind of story. how weird...

let's just say somehow tyson gets 'ToO' close to hilary and starts kinda... hitting on her, kai gets jelous, and overreacts. then somehow, tyson "FINDS" his way into her room when she's sleeping(still loves kai though) and rapes her.

then, he takes some pictures(or something) and blackmails her to have sex with him a lot or he just keeps touching her or making her do some 'stuff. YES I NO, OOC. then, bam, kai sees them, and then blows up!

he slaps wutever, and hills tries to apologize. i can't rite anymore caz my dad just came home, so, got to go! e-mail me if u need more info. o ya, i can help u write or i can make a quick pre-write of wutevva u need.

when i have time. i'm sorry! i got summer school. i didn't fail btw. TT-TT

u so need to update its like 5/16/07

don't u think that it's been a bit long time since u have updated ur chaps . would u b kind enough to update it.

i liked the fic

omg this was so sweet n cute!okay i'm don't really no how 2 rite a lemon but y don't u just borrow 1 from an authoress but change it a little bit n go read lemon fic till u no how 2 rite 1 i never rite 1 but i think i sorta no how 2 rite cuz i won't b doing lemon fics till 2008 after my b-day so yeah i'm so not helping u am i? i no i'm hopeless i can't think of an idea 4 my stories how am i suppose 2 help u i'm so sorry 4 wasting your time reading this stupid review so plz read more lemon fics then update kay! 3

Story is son!

hey. this story is really good. it is getting interesting. i'm sorry, but i can't help you with your lemon, because i myself can't write them, and if i did help, i would most likely butcher it. i hope that you get the help you need. i also hope that you continue this story and put up the next part soon. i really want to find out what happens next.

O.k. Pick someone to help you NOW! I can't but hello its been almost 3 months we need more story! Sorry... that was rude... oh well, JUST WRITE DAMNIT!

I'll help if you want, a fic this great needs a lemon! You should go and have a look at some other Kai/Hilary lemons as well, find out whether you prefer a certain style. Het(straight) lemon is very unappreciated!

Anyway, I really like this fic! It's very original, which is good, because so many plots nowadays are just used again and again and again; it's good to see something new!

Update as soon as you've sorted the lemon!

yo e mail me i can help , or you can ask, mystic -water ,ahnigurl they can help you and there great auothers (?)

ja ne