This is SO sad! I loved it, though. Keep up the good work!

Wow- so much humor and poetry and angst in one small fic. I love the imagery of Roger's sheepish (or not so sheepish, knowing him) call from London, and the beautiful sentance, "They hear ellipses, the unfinished sentence of her life." Simply beautiful.

Oh, god. Oh god oh god oh god oh god. This was absolutely amazing. And incredible. I think I spent ten minutes staring at the screen in shock of how good it was. How has this gotten so few reviews?

It was depressing, but fantastic. I wanted to walk up to Roger and punch him in the face, actually, to get him to stop and realize that his best friend was there for him. So, so stupid... *shakes head at Roger's idiocy* The last two paragraphs were perfect, and beautifully bittersweet. Mark's voice felt so... Marklike. You really got him in character.

And some of the smaller things, like how Angel made sure Collins stored up enough love? *dies* Everything, and I do mean everything, in this story moved me. Inspired me, too. I think I'm going to go write a few fics now.

Oh, and- have you ever gone to the livejournal community fuckingartists? You should. I bet they'd really appreciate your stuff. It's Go! Submit your fic! (Including "Green", which is another incredible story.) Now! *nods hopefully*

~DF

"They hear an ellipses, the unfinished sentence of her life."

That sentence gave me chills.

Nicely done.

*wibble* That. Was. Beautiful. As someone who regularly writes both Mark AND April... that was beautiful.

Thank you for writing that. *nods*

*hugs* I loved it. Angsty Mark is adorable and I want to hug him (maybe get Roger an Enternal Sunshine memory wipe in the case of April 'Am I the only one who doesn't like her?')

Oh, wow. I absolutely love this. Really. Bitter!Mark is great, and it's even better how he reveals little bits of Roger throughout the story. That little bit about the Pyramid Club brought to mind the little clips of Roger and April in the RENT trailer... but I'll stop the loserness right now, as much as I can. This is going on my favorites list, and... you should do more one shots. Because... just... wow.

I'm not really sure what to say to this...

Firstly, this story was truly amazing. You are truly a gifted writer...

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