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   momo552 chapter 14 . 12/1/2013 I skipped to the last chapter and I have to say it was a nice ending. I have to hand it to you for giving everyone a happy ending, including Arwen. I am glad that you thought of such a way, and were able to write a wonderful ending. Although, my previous comment stays true. I am glad that I did read the last chapter and I left with a lighter heart. May the Valar guide you! :D |
| momo552 chapter 7 . 12/1/2013 Your stories are nice but they lack depth. Your characters lack depth in many ways, such as vocabulary, they speak in such a frivolous manner. They have no manner and are very blunt. If we stay true to the true traits of the LOTR characters, I do not think that Legolas would have fallen in love with this girl. She is too rowdy and unrefined. I am just providing you with adequate criticism. However, your originality is something that I cannot deny. Therefore, good job on that part. Keep up the good work. I believe that you can become a wonderful writer if you chose to be so, by refining your writing skills. Also, practice makes perfect, hopefully you will be able to show maturity in your writing as years have passed. :) |
| Yuki Suou chapter 14 . 2/22/2013 N0t bad but very childish... |
| Pein's Kid chapter 14 . 7/11/2011 I was truly touched and I cried when she faded and when I real the letters |
| heavenslilagl420 chapter 14 . 7/6/2011 LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! |
| xavia chapter 14 . 1/15/2008 lovely |
| TheSongOfNature chapter 14 . 12/25/2006 I like this ending MUCH better then the ACTUAL ending, thought I do feel only a TEENY, TINY, bit of pity for Rosie |
| i-want-cheese chapter 14 . 7/16/2006 this story was m-azing truely the best i've read in a while u have great talent i loved it and cant wait to read more of ur stories ~the girl who loves cheese |
| i-want-cheese chapter 13 . 7/15/2006 ya shay rocks i luv her she is my hero or heroin or w/e idk its late lol luv ur story |
| i-want-cheese chapter 12 . 7/8/2006 yeah men will live another day and so will women ya YA YA YA YA ok i am done good job |
| i-want-cheese chapter 11 . 7/8/2006 i luv this chappie |
| i-want-cheese chapter 10 . 7/7/2006 omg no elix cant die aw good story though |
| i-want-cheese chapter 9 . 1/19/2006 cool chappie |
| i-want-cheese chapter 8 . 1/19/2006 yay shay didnt die and she better not |
| i-want-cheese chapter 7 . 1/6/2006 awsome very good |
