Great little oneshot! Moving, poignant, and I love your portrayal of Elrond and Gil-galad! Thanks for writing it!

Halo

Man I have read the other one as well and the two of them are just so sad! Sniff! However, I feel you have completely got the character. Kindof emotional, but not. Does that even make sense? I hope it does. Anyway I like this and hope you write more like this and the second one. They are great!

Cool story! I like how you put Gil-Galad with fear of death... Nice work. I really want to read the sequel to it!