I lol'd.
The twins was my favorite.

Hilarious!

This was really funny, and I found myself laughing a ton while reading. You should do more comedic works like this. Keep up the good work!

Loved it. Totally. Especially the Tweebs and Monique. Classic! You do 'funny' very well.

hahahahaha poor Drakken

Only one thing to say here - LOL! Funniest little thing I've read in a long time!

LOL this was awesome xDDD

Hehe, really funny :) Loved the twist with Monkey Fist.

I'd have to say my favorite was Ron's. Of course, we gotta bring in the monkey ninjas. XD

Very funny story. Thanks for the laugh. [:

Thnx - this really made my day!

so hilarious.

write more!

"So let's talk size. What are you, a two? Oh, now I KNOW you're trying to get out of the torture." OMG on the ground laughing. Loved the twins too!

"Kim has all his addresses written down, anyway" Hilarous, fits in perfectly with the show!

i can so imagine all that stuff happening.

Nate,

Okay...Rat-napping was one thing. Taking Shego on a shopping spree? Bottles of pop? Hostages more destructive than the captors? A 'Time-Share' sidekick?

It may not have been a good day for Drakken, but it was a good day for me when I found this story.

Your friend in writing,

The Samurai Crunchbird

I smiled.

Like, three times.

This was a good idea, I like it.

You should do a sequel, with like, Barken (or whatever his name is) and bonnie and such.

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cute story i loved the part with monique and shego CLASSIC