I really love that you put the miror in there it was really clever!

Ha! At first I thought this might be slash between Harry and Ron, but I was wrong! Not that it matters, I like this story, really brings out the true feelings these two have for eachother. It leaves a bitter taste in a my mouth when I think about how J.K. Rowling didn't explain Ron and Hermione's love life as I hoped she would. Ah, well. Her stories are great nonetheless. Ah, off topic! Yes, good story. )

you have to write more!

Hm...I really like the idea to this story. And the story was great as well- but I think you could have added a little more description and thought into the action. And, YES! You should add more! But I don't think you should turn it into another chapter. Honestly, you could put it at the end of this one, making it really sweet. Anywho- Awesome!

yes! please add on!

it leaves me hanging...

You should go to Nebraska more often if this is what you cooks up on the way ;-)

I like the dramaturgy of this fic, throwing the reader - and Ron - between three totally contrasting emotions. The everyday grumpiness in the beginning, the sudden confused hints of love in the middle, and then the totally unprepared-for expolsion of jellosity in the end. Ron will have some serious thinking to do now. Very good!

I think you should add more. I had this exact idea when I first joined and it's already been done! If I do do it, though, it will be different, but still Ron/Hermione.

I read your bio. I too LOATHE Lavender.

Anyway, nice oneshot!

It was really good for a first try. I really like the idea and would love something after it..

This is a really good oneshot! But it left me wanting more :( Good job though *secretly hoping you add more to this*

yes yes yes, add more, its a lovely one-shot, but its not really finished, so, yeah, deffinitly add more

It wasn't horribe at all. And I agree that's what he'd see in the mirror. ;) I just didn't get it... What on earth was Hermione talking about at the end?

I thought it was a little confusing. I can't figure out what's going on. xo, H

Please continue!

I'm dying to know what Harry and Hermione are re-searching!

Oh, this was good! It could have had some more description somehow, but I really liked this. I love HermionexRon Erised fics. -squeals- This was so cute! Yay! Also, everyone was very canon. Cheers!

i totally think you should have. it leaves too much out!