Kool, sorry for the late review, school again. Sappy ending for a good story.

Does this mean what I think it means? Yup, you're gonna write a sequel aren't you? Mmhmm.

Logan and Raven are gonna hae a baby? Cute.

You forgot about one other thing... now I know it's irrelivent but... what about that funeral for Jinx? Hmm? Oh well. Maybe we'll get some of it later.

What are you gonna do now, after your breake, that it. Finish Nightmares Never Die, or write that sequel? Methinks you should finish Nightmares Never Die, so you'll get it out the way.

Later.

It was rushed, but you mentioned is so I'll shut up about it.

Logan and Malice kick ass. Yay.

There are still some unanswered quesions. What about the other three guards? Where did Riku go? Did Malice's deamon friends manage to ake all the money before the building colapsed? Will Jinx have a funeral? Is Price really dead? Do space aliens really exist? Why does Batman have a square-shaped chin? Why is the Penguin so fat? Who invented disclaimers? And why are you reading this lame review when you should be updating the last chapter?

Huh, ShadeyMike? ANSWER ME!

Nice twist, very nice. It's all so clear now! Just remember to check yourself. Re-read your chapters, and you'll catch alot of mistakes

Wow! Price is all-powerful and stuff. Logan douesn't stand a chance. Well, at least on his own, he doesn't.

And looky here. The other Titans are coming to help. Hurry, Titans.

I wonder how Nightwing's doing.

And Malice. LOL. Price will be so pissed.

You scarred me for a seacond there. I really thaught Cyborg, Sarah, Starfire, Raven, Gizmo and Mammoth were dead. It turns out they weren't.

Update soon.

'Nother good chapter. keep em commin'

Very nice chapter, just the "your"/"you're" thing... Keep it up man

It's okay Mr. D, we all have our pissy moments. Or anal moments. Whichever floats your boat. And Mr. D, I agree, once again, Mike is getting better. The word "beat" is spelled as such, not "beet". That's technically a correct spelling, but grammatically incorrect.

And I appluad you for improving on the "block chapter" thing. Even though, yes, you had dialogue down, you still needed work on the block. You still need work, but don't focus on that as much.

VERY nice twist with Speedy there. I truly and honestly did NOT see that coming. Very good plot twist there. Well, if I missed anything, Mr. D covered it.

One last thing, sorry for the late reviews, I'm going to review each chapter individually, cause "TODD CAN'T COUNT!" Lol, from Spawn, but it's so I can pinpoint the issues better. And I'm so SORRY for the not havin Hell's Generals chapter out! But, school, which is also why the late reviews.

WOW! Talk about action! Who knew Proce was such a fighter?

How'll Nightwing get out of this one, now that Riku's all-poweful and stuff?

I'm glad to see you remembered the other three.

Update soon.

So Logan and Price finally come should be brilliant.

The story is almost over, eh? What about the remaining three of those six super-people? Falcon, Terra and Deadeye were the first three.

I really shouldn't complain about Jinx's demise, cuz you did that to Aqualad, Bumblebee, Mas and Menos. And speaking of the last three, where are they?

Nightwing's in for it now. I can't wait.

Update soon.

Okay, okay. I was a jackass. Sorry, Judas Rising, for the cold remark *holds hand out for Judas to shake*. No hard feelings?

Let's review the chapter, shall we?

Ahem. The first three paragraphs were a signal which told me that your writing style has improved. Good job at that.

I noticed something. You keep mixing up the short version of 'you are'. Sometimes, you get it right; sometimes, you get it wrong. The shorter version is 'you're'. 'Your' is the possesive. This mistake is more common (not in your story, but the whole fanfiction sight) than blue sky in the Mediterranean.

We didn't see much of Logan in this chapter. It's a good idea to give the readers/viewers a breake from the main character once in a while. Kudos.

YOU KILLED JINX? This is an outrage! I'm outraged beyond words!... Although I do have something to say:

I was shocked to see that she was killed by Speedy. I was relieved when it wasn't really Speedy. Then I laughed at the thought of the real Speedy shooting Jinx by mistake, saying 'Oops' ans slowly scooting away as if nothing happened. It kinda reminds me about Happy Tree Friends.

Damn, I like to ramble sometimes.

Update soon.

P.S: That small argument between Judas and I was NOTHING compared to the reviews I've seen for another story. It had 28 reviews and only four or five of them were actual reviews (not including mine). The rest were all arguments against the author or people sticking up for the author. It's now deleted.

P.P.S: See? I told you I like to ramble.

2 things: To Mr. D: Yeah, this is M-rated, I can read. I just am of the opinion that curse words take away from a story, which I can deal with some, but to me, they take away from it. Get over it.

The second thing: Nice, good chapter, and I agree with Mr. D, you need more paragraphs and punctuation. If you're using Word Pad, I completely understand. But still, you should be able to spot those. Try re-reading your chapters before posting them. You should see alot of what we're talking about.

You don't write wierd, dude. At least you took my addvice.

To Judas Rising: It's rated M. You're bound to find curse words in an M-rated fanfic. Deal with it.

Looks like this arc's gonna kick ass! Everyone's loaded. EVEN THE CHILDREN! They're heading for one hellova fight.

“Come on Star, they don’t want us here.”-Mammoth.

Would Mammoth really call Starfire 'Star'? Would he say what he said? Would he put a hand on her shoulder? The answers are: 'No', 'no' and 'no'.

Cyborg and Speedy are arguing. I have no idea who's the bigger asshole. LOL.

Update soon.

AH! CURSE WORDS! This chapter gets a low rating because of the curse words. I'm sorry, but they take alot away from the story. More than your usual amount.

Lately, I've been noticing something about your writing style which I should have pointed out earlier:

You tend to write one bigass paragraph which describes action. You only make a new paragraph when someone speaks. This isn't good, cuz it bunched text together, making to hard for the reader to... um, read. When the subject changes, create a paragraph, alright?

Don't go back and edit yet. Do that after this fic is finished. (That is, IF you're gonna go back)

The above was just addvice. The review will begin soon.

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Damn, the titans are loaded even more than before. It's cool and all, but don't forget their actual powers, dude.

I've said it before and I'll say it again: LOGAN KICKS ASS! Have you ever watched the Madness Combat flash animations? Or the Bunnykill flash animations? Logan's little fight scene remeinded me a lot about them (save the talking).

Update soon.