O.o

o.O

o.o

O.O

She killed him?

Oh, dear! :-0

that was umm weird actually but well r/r mine if you have time.

Holy shit! Did she strangle him? Woah! eep. Ah, if i'm wrong please tell me. Er. Reminds me of a short story from somewhere. Or maybe not. Good writing.

i must be missing something. i liked it, but im not sure exactly what occured. did jareth die at the end? do they both? was it just a dream, a vision that never actually happened?

strange? lol but cute

that was good... i had to read the last paragraph a few times but it was still good.

odd. must be the stress but i don't really see what happened. Good story anyway.

I AM CONFUSED! are you saying the crystal is the crystal of dreams and jareth isn't real? none of the *ahem* stuff between them just now didn't really happen?

Whew . . . Nicely written, but a bit dark.

that was good_

had to read the last couple of paragraphs a few more times..but wow..good fic..it's stil a little unclear..*or maybe I'm just dense* yep..that's probably what it is..Poor Jareth..oh well _..again good work -sky

YOu did warm us, but it is still beautiful writing. The last paragraph took a few read throughs to get, though.

That was twisted. I like, I like. Very well written