Well nice story after all, Seifer gets screwed over, Squinoa, all the good stuff. The only thing is that Squall is a bit OCC but maybe that was intentional oh well what usually begins well ends well and this one did...congrats

It was really super sappy here and may have been a little too much for me. However, it was an interesting new plot to write about though the amazon thing weirded me out a little. It just seemed like too much to incorporate. I would have preferred it if the other members came to join Rinoa and Squall instead but hey I still enjoyed reading this.

Cheers

Keep Writing

i luved the plot and i really like how you included actual magic, gfs, items and monsters. ]

very very very good story

this is such a cute story!

i know a perfect song that goes with this story too!

cool

great story

Hi i have just finished reading "his only love" fantastic story congratulations they way you make everything sound so good in detail is great i just thought i would review because i have only read two books on this and yours was the best one yet so thanks for the great read.

I really liked the first 13 chapters :) the others were ok but first 13 were the best. Maybe sometime you could rewrite the other half with none of the stuff with the witch :D Towards the end Squall got all... lovey dovie like... he seemed to OOC. But great great story. One of the best I've read :)

But I'd say 4.5/5 :) Very good.

This is one of the best stories i have read for a while. Great job, keep up the good work

...I am awed by this story, It was very well written and structured and I hope that you will write a sequal

Write on!

aww so sweet of squall...i like the ending, but it looks as if it could continue...yea, so keep up the good work!

i thought your story was brilliant although you made it quite soppy but the action and plot were fantastic

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! *chants*

i thought it was brill what happened to zell and why did you hell end i want more?