Another stupid Sesshomaru/Rin pairing? What the hell? HE WOULD NEVER MATE WITH RIN NO MATTER WHAT AGE SHE IS! SHE IS HIS FREAKING DAUGHTER IN THE SERIES AND MANGA! Where the hell do people get the idea that he would ever see her as more than a DAUGHTER?!

I read this story years and years ago, but all I remembered about it was that I really liked it. I just finished re-reading it, and just wanted to express my appreciation for the work. As a writer I understand how challenging it is to tie so many disparate elements together in a longer story. But you pulled it off, everything from the prologue, to the prophesy, to Kikyou and Sesshoumaru's partial understanding of the situation and attempts to protect Kagome. I cannot think of any loose ends. And things got complicated there at the end! The explanation was long-winded, but I think it had to be. You explained it in a way that made sense without making it seem preachy, and pulled off the ultimate theme which connected everything without seeming cliche to me, which it definitely could have been if not executed so well. Part of me wished for a longer epilogue, but I'm still very satisfied.

Not sure if you follow fanfiction anymore or visit the site occasionally, but people do still read and appreciate great stories. I'm really glad I revisited this one.

Holy cow. That story was amazing. I can't believe you don't have more reviews, but I am so glad I found this story reguardless! I hope you keep up writing, you're very good at it!

there is something in the cosmos that is saying no to them screwing each other lmbo! this is like try number three...guess its not the charm lol!
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dun dun duuuunnn lol
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funny chapter! poor miroku and his cursed hand lol
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oh damn lol its about to get real lol
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intense!
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Hey there. Just finished reading your story and wow! I'm blown away at your ability to produce some so beautiful for a first story. I wish the first story I wrote turned out that good. I loved the way you portrayed the emotions. It was so freaking intense. Wow! I could totally visualize each act as it happend. Really beautiful and adventurous story you have here. It was a pleasure to read as I'm sure it was your pleasure to write and more than deserving of each review. Thanks for gifting your readers with this little slice of heaven. Good luck with your future endeavors as I do so love your portrayal of Kagome and Inuyasha so much.

Oh my God! I was just gonna flip out after she died the second time. Thank God Inuyasha gave her soul back. Now they can be together forever.

The places where Kagome's powers take her are a bit scary. Hope all will be well when she returns and Naraku is destroyed forever.

I knew things were gonna get ugly in this chapter but I never thought she'd take her own life. What a sacrifice!

The war has finally began and our favorite couple are all wrapped up into each other. The emotions between Kagome and Inuyasha are so freaking intense. Wow, you really blew me away with their intimate scenes. Inu/Kag on that cold forest floor was downright sexy. Now that they've consummated their mating they're now ready for battle. I can't help but wonder if they hadn't gotten physical would her mind be clear and ready for battle. I know heartache is coming but hopefully it won't remain that way.

I'm scared to find out what'll happen next.

I love the way Kagome's powers are progressing. Thanks for explaining the shikon and necklace cause I kinda got confused for a moment. Now on to the rest of the story.