Great chapter! I really liked Dave's message on Rory's machine. :)

Please continue soon

Oh! I just love the possibility of the Rory/Dave pairing. Pity it could never happen.

I just love the story, and imagining the antics from both Rory and Dave make me giggle. And I'm pretty sure with these two in mind, the date will be very entertaining. Can't wait.

Update soon when you can.

Heh, it alwasy take you so long that I expect it to be over...;-) But tahnk all that is holy that it never is, because how would I ever get my Dave-fix, if it wasn't for you... Please, be quicker this time...

Loved the chapter, 'specially Dave running up the stairs... Ah, the mental image...

Cute chapter !

Still here, waiting for an update... I really love this story...

oMg ! you updated lol. I didn't expect this. I loved lane's blessing.

While I am EXTREMELY glad that you updated (I had almost given up hope), I hope that your writing bug will continue to bite you- for I cannot get enough of this story, or the pairing for that matter. Rory needs a nice guy (one who is not Dean- I never liked Dean, even before he was married) and if only Adam Brody had stayed on GG instead of going to the OC, he would've been a great guy for her.

I like how Rory called Lane- it was a very Rory-thing to do. And I liked how they didn't end up kissing or anything that night, just getting hideously drunk. But I really liked the last sentence- even if it IS a cliffhanger. That being said, you need to update sooner than last time, because it's not fair to leave us hanging like that.

Anyway, great story. Until next time!

great start! Cant wait to read more...

wow, i absoulutely LOVE LOVE LOVE this! i never thought of ROry and Dave, and now that i've read this i love the ide of them together, UPDATE SOON!

Hi... I so didn't expect this, but it was great, can't wait for more...

Ooh, she's breaking out the flirty Victoria's Secret bra for him, huh?

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She leans closer to him, smiling, and for a half a second he thinks he will die of happiness.

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*Sigh* That's a good feeling. That's a perfect way to word it, too.

AWW! It made me all warm and fuzzy! Aww. I love it. It's sweet. And she made him feel like he could die of happiness. That's just fabulous.

Lol, but Rory had dirty thoughts. That's so funny. I mean, not that she had them, but how they came about. Made me smile.

You got me so caught up in the excitement at the end there that even I was excited, and I have never been to SNL.

I'm going to try to get that third chapter now, and if I can't I'll ask you for it.

First: It's fabulous!

Second: Darn it, I can't even bust on Rory anymore. So much joy has been taken from my life.

Aww, Dave hasn't had a girlfriend since Lane? Poor Dave. He needs a hug.

Ooh, I like! It's a little hard to get used to the new pairing, but once you do it's cool! The writing is fantastic, of course. I could totally see Dave sitting there when she walked up, listening to his music and tapping to the beat. Tapping is so cute. I love when guys do that.

Anyway, it is wonderful, naturally, your writing is superb. Now I'm on to chapter two!

Aw..how sweet they are together, finally someone writes about them . :D

I loved it! I love all unlikely ships, and I think this one is a new passion of mine... Is there any hope that you will update this story...? I hope you will...