i hate it when people lets good fics die before they can really spread their wings, but this was amazing

Excellent story, it's so hard to find a good Grievous story. But this is really good.

WOW.

I am...

Totally stunned.

I can't even find the words to express my amazement at this exquisite piece of fiction.

Just...

WOW.

Hi. Excellent fanfic. Great job

GENERAL OF KALEE

Oh...wow. Such description. Well done!

Its over! So sad. I really enjoyed this fic, you did a very good job. I think it would be cool to see you do more things about Grievous.

Not bad, I enjoyed reading this. Good Grievous fanfiction is difficult to come by, but you captured a side of the Generalnot shown, while portraying your view of the Kaleesh. I muchly liked the description used, how you managed to make the reader feel what the character felt as he was force fed, you used the comparison to a child, very effective, and to the tribal scenes. All in all, minus a few grammar and punctuation errors, a good story.

. YAY! way to go, buddy! i'm very proud of you!

it was pretty cool! you word things so amazingly well! I wish I could do that! .

oh well, back to you! that was really good! it may have been Star Wars, but i still likes it! yay yay!

_ have fun being an authoress!

~Masami

I'm glad more Grievous fics are appearing, I'm a huge fan of the guy. I was sad that there weren't many stories featuring him and for a while I was beginning to lose hope. And, he truly didn't deserve such a death like he did. I'm so happy you changed that. Thank you for contributing to the small amount of Grievous fics that are out there!

Is the sole reason you wrote this to develop Grievous more? I ask because the summary feels too vague.