Wow. This whole story was amazing. I just loved the progression and the way you portrayed Fred, Angelina, and all of the other characters. I wonder how what chapters you would have added if you had known the outcome of the war and the fact Angelina ends up with George. But anyways this was so great

Love this. Way more realistic than others I've read

I'm so late to this but I do hope you either continue or try working on the sequel you mentioned. There are a lot of Angelina and Fred stories but I think yours is the first that is truly written well, capturing their characters and chemistry. You have a knack for description and witty dialogue! I really hope you continue this and break through any writer's block you might have cause, like, AHH ilovethisSOmuch.

Omg there is no sequel! It can't end n like this! lol.

Great start.

A-ma-zing. Seriously. I'm like on the verge of tears now.

This story is one of the best Fred/Angelina's I've read.

NO*sob*O*sob*O*sob*O!

MUST READ SEQUEL!

ohh man, was that the end? that was soo sad. i loved itt to death. awesome job!

xx kikicant

I don't know what to say to this chapter. I really hope you'll continue...

So I was all "yay, they're getting together!" and then I was all "no! no, they're not! never mind!" It's just so...angsty. *sigh*

Please do a sequel...I'm dying for one. *offers cookies*

Anyways, if you don't- bravo anyway! It was an amazing story that was quiet but so...there. I don't know. It was just lovely.

'Angelina grinned. “Blimey, that’s a hot piece of ancient arse.”' I died at this line.

Brilliant, as usual...you keep a lovely dialogue balance between Fred and Ange, always leaning towards something more but pulling out of it quickly with a quip or joke. :D It's marvelous.

Yay for Lifehouse!

I love how Fred is all protective. *sigh* So cute. But what I love most is that they haven't even kissed yet. It just makes the waiting better...

Yay for Coldplay! *waves Coldplay flag*

This chapter was masterfully done...as your other chapters have been...but this one, at the beginning, had that despair just underneath its words...made something in my chest hurt to hear Fred go on about Ginny and Angelina trying to comfort him...but it worked out well, so yay!

First of all, yay for using Keane- I heart them. :)

Second of all, what a lovely, tantalizing chapter! *can't get over how cute they are*

'He licked his lips, and grinned. "In that case," he murmured, moving closer, "can I show you this horrible bruise I have on my-" '

Classic Fred. I loved it.

I think what I love most so far about this story is that you've made Fred and George into two separate, but believable characters- Fred especially. I adore this side we see of him in this one.

'His mouth was brief and warm against her cold skin; it was when he pulled away, blushing and murmuring, "Good luck, Angie, I'll be watching," that she realized he had kissed her.'

*squees*

A very big apology to you- I've had this story up on my Favorites list for a while now, and have yet to review! *smacks self* I dislike lurkers myself...so here's my very late review.

This is an amazing story- I've always shipped Fred/Angelina, but have never seen a story quite like this. It's beautiful, absolutely beautiful. *beams* I'm off to read the next chapter!

(Fred didn't want to kill the dragonfly! *!* So cute...)