Amazing story! I loved it!
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This started out really well, but the fact that it's 50k words and only one chapter makes it hard to read.

awesome story very tragic but well written it actually had depth and a great plausiable plot im proud of you this would make a great movie one day keep up the good work

Wow. Great story, or should I say chapter? Well, whichever it was, it was brilliant. You are a really talented writer. Seriously. It was really good.

Logan and Rogue were so cool. I just love them. So glad they came together and told esch other what they meant to each other.

It was really beautiful.

Keep up the good work and update soon, if there's gonna be more, cause I don't see that the story is complete.

its 3 in the morning and.. i'm here, just done reading your fic. whoah.. this was nice stuff, man! i mean it! its too bad though that the paragraphs were packed up in later chapters that it got too confusing to read. but anyways. the story was good. nicely written too. _

It was a great story and finally logan got his revenge on stryker. There is one thing that puzzles me is that when rogue finally got a handle on her skin, and Rogue and Logan finally made love wasn't she on birth control? I mean that was the reason why Logan did not wear a condom. because later in the story when they where in that underground bunker Rogue mentioned to Logan that maybe she should get on some birth control. Well my point is if she was already on birth control she would not have needed it.

hey this is a gr8 story it tok me like four days to read and im not srry i read it.

i think ur a gr8 writer and wud probably get mroe people readin this if it had chapters as i found it hard to find my place agen each tym i strtd reaadin it. lol.

Keep writing

XxGemxX

wow, that was great! and long... but i guess if you used chapters it would take longer to post... Maybe you want it like that, but FYI you dont have anonymous reviews allowed. :)

wow i loved it wow