I love how I’m character you’re able to write both characters!

So, what was on the blue disk?

Aaaaaahhhh I love this SO MUCH

I loves this story, I loved Nick and Greg's interactions with each other and their whole friendship as well as having a very good plot. Well done

i really enjoyed reading this story. i loved it.

Excellent story! One of my top 10 Nick and Greg csi fics

I read this story all in one go and loved every word of it. Well done for writing such an intense and well-paced story.

any chance at an alternate ending? one where memphis and dallas get away?

! holy crap, dude - YOU ROCK! DONT EVER QUIT WRITING! seriously, awesome. i dont think i have a single criticism - even in the best kidnapping stories, something can make it too cliche, too overdramatic, too dragged out, too brief...but dude, that was just...amazing. great job!

...! I SAW THAT COMING! not until a couple of pages before it did, but still...grargh! greggo! FREAKOUT!

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...phew...yes...YES! THEY FOUNDED HIM! also, i have to go to bed, but i will finish this story! you rock! and have epic music taste - have you heard of simple plan?

aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww your nearly making me cry - im actually listening to wake me up when september ends - such an awesome song...but i didnt recognise the first song - what was it? looked like greenday to me, or something similar.

...! nononono that idiot sniper! awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww man! whats gonna happen now! GRAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!

...wow, so angsty! i love the angst, even tho it means i - what with my attatchment to greg being stronger than that of some of the actual characters on the show - am practically tearing my hair out! you got some serious skill, f you've got anything published, let me know!

wow, its been waaaaaaaaaaaay to long since i read a kidnap story this good. dallas is bad enough, but memphis - dude SERIOUSLY creeps me out. and this storys an M as well, i normally read Ts.

im such an angst addict, this storys real goood!