That was so HOT!

you should do like an omake or something and add in maes winning the pot lol and you did wonderful i loved it please continue to write no matter what :]

Nice job

WAHH! This has been SUCH an awesome fic, I can't believe that it's your first!

*Sigh* They are so freaking adorable together :3

Hmm, so Maes gets fifty bucks?

"Don't worry Ed, I was just thinking to much that's all." The blonde didn't move an inch not sure as to what to do. 'I never noticed before but Mustang smells really good, like a match that just went out and some spices.' They stayed like that for what seemed like a short eternity. Roy let go, they moved a little apart. "Now, let's tack care of those burns." The Colonel had his smirk back, yet he still looked amazing."

There are a few spelling errors in the last paragraph. For example, "Don't worry Ed, I was just thinking to much that's all."

It's supposed to be "Don't worry Ed, I was just thinking TOO much that's all."

Next is this:"Now, let's tack care of those burns." The Colonel had his smirk back, yet he still looked amazing.

You spelled tack instead of take :]]]

I hope that helps! It was a great chapter!

I always wondered what Ed would look like older with his hair down, probably super sexy :]]]

Poor Edward xP

So. Much. SEXY!L

Hmmm Edwards feelings and virginity? Why do I love tht sentence so much? :)

Hahahahahahaha I absolutely love the bet thing! Oh Hughes your so smart!

So ummmmm HE SO LOVES HIM EEEEEEPPPP!

OOOOOO Ed sounded extremely yummy .

Hehehehe "'Bad though-bad though...'" I love that! :D