The comment is only one - I am looking forward to reading your storry further :) For me it seems interesting enough. I did not discover all the ideas yet :)

Nice story so far, rather enjoying it.

Harry however is a total idiot. "I wonder who the lioness with brown eyes could possibly be even though I selected a lioness as Hermione's Animagus form and I constantly take notice of her brown eyes."

Well done and thanks for sharing, I'm now off to read the rest.

I like that Harry doesn't get every cliche thing coming his way, like being quidditch captain, but unhappy another annoying cliche I don't like, becoming animagi, which will no doubt take away from what I enjoy most about stories

beautiful story am excited for it

don't know if youre still active, but the rew comes anyway, specially because I really wonder about those theories of Hermiones lost backbone... so if you are, please, I wanna know!
I really like what I've been reading so far
the story its original and very likeable

With a name like that I would think bird rather than feline lol.

Severus needs a leash . He is such an intelligent man to be a double spy for so long and survive. His immaturity though by far overshadows his intellect. It will eventually get him or Harry killed.

Ron is as insensitive as always I see.

Wicked story so far and i like the thought of harry being inside crookshanks and harry turning into an inferno as you put it so keep up the good work and finish the story

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Hi Tojot,

I'm only in chapter 13 of this story, and I know the last time you updated was four years ago in 2009, but I wanted to let you know that I am very much enjoying your writing. I have seen a couple of spelling errors, but the characterization, the development of your original characters, the adventure you are having Harry and his friends go on, and the way you're bring Hermione (my favorite character too!) and Harry together...it's all so wonderful. While portkey may have rejected your application way back when (I hope they have since then accepted you), I think that your plotting of this story is subtle and lovely.

Best of luck in writing and other endeavours!

Haven't read the chapter yet, but I'll say it's been slow plot. You have the pieces to the puzzle. Harry's DA, Voldemort and the protection, the new Defence professor, and odd H/Hr relationship. But yeah; plot development has been slow/stagnant. Animagus training is on hold as is all Harry stuff, though you've opened the H/Hr door with Crookshanks. But-plot. Where is it going? What's the end goal? How will things develop? I can't guess. I have a vague idea of the sub-plot with the cat, but that can't be the main story point.

Don't get me wrong; I like this story a lot (I would stop reading if I didn't find it quite interesting). But I do agree with the Portkey's decision. Plot development is slow/non-existant. Sub-plot? A bit. Interesting story with no clue how it'll end up? Yepp!

I hate cliffies but this is interesting I do hope you add more soonest.

""It may have been." Dumbledore sighed. "I have recently heard evidence from the centaur herds that a young foul had gone missing just last week.""

I think you meat foal instead of foul! Foal's are cute while foul's are bad! :) ROFL!

JimS

""Harry, in the past I've wanted you so badly than I could bare."

I think that should be bear. Bare would be naked! :) ROFL!

JimS