| Reviews for What Now? |
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   Jade4839 chapter 1 . 3/13/2016 wow |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2013 Well I thought this was a really cute and awesome story and thank you for writing it for those of us who read these kind of things :) |
| edwardfiend chapter 1 . 5/25/2012 Loved Mustang's answer: "we do whatever we want Riza". Very simple and true. Great one shot. |
| CrazyHorseNinja chapter 1 . 11/8/2009 I don't know why, but this is the FIFTH M-rated fic I've favorited! |
| Angel Fantasy chapter 1 . 6/22/2009 Well, I must say that for your first try, you were very talented. I won't blame ya for spelling errors; I do the same thing once I'm out of school lol. |
| Alek chapter 1 . 11/5/2008 Cool. Just Amazing, sweet and explosive. Good job. |
| Drifting One chapter 1 . 2/2/2007 For your first lemon, it was pretty good! |
| ArtisticRelevance chapter 1 . 1/4/2007 mmhmm dat wuz gewd! X) |
| Winry Brennan chapter 1 . 11/6/2006 I Heart Lemons! Espesially Royai lemons! Don't worry. Great job! |
| Nilmiel chapter 1 . 2/28/2006 Nil: A good idea, but a little cliche-ish. Mustang, i can understand, but Riza was... n. Very un-riza-ish. She woudn't do that so quick. I mean, i kno she loves him, but...no. To fast. It would have been better if there had been more leading up to it. |
| Faith de la Alovee chapter 1 . 11/20/2005 That was probably the best lemon I've read on here. You've got a talent...and maybe too much experience x.O. Anyways that was great-congrats! |
| crazy yaoi fangirl chapter 1 . 10/28/2005 For your first lemon that was pretty good! |
| Kazanekyo chapter 1 . 10/22/2005 Holy... F-... You so rock. |
| rizahawkeye21 chapter 1 . 10/15/2005 lol hell to hand basket... :D very good... keep writing... |
