I really like it so far :)

will u make more cuz this is wickedly cool!

TRIKI-SAMA!

great story has all the right elements

hey nice one, going on my favs, keep up the good work!

Great, but Damons just a tad litlle bit arrogant, isnt he ?

Darn, that was really cool. That's all I got for here.

Awsome chappie. You finally updated! Though I shouldn't talk, I havent updated my story in like forever . . . anyway. I think that was really sweet of Aelita to give his bandana back. I think Damon might have a split personality, one on Earth and one as the Virtual Dreamer. Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

love it write more!

Hm, you updated ( Its gonna rain ... ). Thats a good chapter too. Update soon, please.

Quite regular begining. You should edit some of the spelling, comas, and stuff like... Damons, put it as Damon's. Please don't take any offense on this. And you got a good title for the story.

BTW, I'm Rodri from LF.

Cool story. Still want to know who the proffessor is. I'm starting to think it's Franz Hopper. I wanna know how Damon is the key to Aelita's Materialization program. Thanks for Updating!

Really ? You just forgot... I thought you had died or something.

i see you got it up- i'll be waiting for #3...tlk to you later...if you need ideas you know how to ask

Wow cool story, I wonder who the professor is. . . is ist ms. hertz? Anyway, Update soon!