What a fantastic story! I'm absolutely loving your on point characterisations, witty lines and amazing storyline, you've done so much research and it really shows. Great, great pieceI really hope you finish it someday.

I love the history accuracy... please finish this story, it is extremely well written and you have left it on a cliffhanger. I'm a history nerd too and appreciated the depth in this story.

I agree. Fine solide writing. There is an actual plot and every character, even Vorik and Carrey get something to do.

Continue this fine work.

Loving it! Great plot and use of all characters, everyone gets a shot. Please keep this up! Can't wait for the next chapter!