This was soo well written. Love it.
Rachel seems lovely.
U showed Dicks intelligence in this very well especially him working out Batman.

I love ur spin to the story. It’s great. Thanks for sharing ur fantastic writing with us.

ok sense you did this have you ever read about Dick. John Grayson or watch Batman the animated season two espoide one Robin's story is in two epideos but a great classic of robin what you did here stayed true to that robin bravo

haha that's sooooo Dick. John Grayson at age 8 or 9 depends on the story but dang bravo on hitting all three right. I keep seening Arkham games or Batman animated of 1992 to 1994 it just wow right perfect with the true story can we make you heaf scritp writer and director of batman begins you would sold out with this plot choice. send it to the compy site WB and DC compeys worker site I not joking this is a plot worth piching to them .

ok sense you did this have you ever read about Dick. John Grayson or watch Batman the animated season two espoide one Robin's story is in two epideos but a great classic of robin what you did here stayed true to that robin bravo

haha that's sooooo Dick. John Grayson at age 8 or 9 depends on the story but dang bravo on hitting all three right. I keep seening Arkham games or Batman animated of 1992 to 1994 it just wow right perfect with the true story can we make you heaf scritp writer and director of batman begins you would sold out with this plot choice. send it to the compy site WB and DC compeys worker site I not joking this is a plot worth piching to them .

the pole lol is called a bostaf wow look up Lee's karate class Paragould lol look for wepons training I wish we could rename irsi or Google AI . I would name mine Alfred and want his britsh voice please lol also I love the bond you have with the three it's really true to the comics and yay for your balance not over dramic story ten out of ten I would watch this Soo much better then the movie they did

awww Richard sooo cute :D

I'm new to your writing, but I'm already in love with it. Before I compliment you on your use of character and theme, I want to say that I find your sense of humor hilarious! Back to your writing abilities; you are very gifted and I can't wait to read some more of your work!

SUPERB.

This is lovely! Great job!
Blessings,
Sophia the Scribe

This is a great story. :) Especially the ending, as an important feature of a story, was well crafted, in my opinion. Thank you for writing this.

8.5 Alfred is being nice as ever and Dick is too pale

7.5 I think this is kinda like Dick Grayson story but in Batman's story but it is just the opening

Good job on this story and... really Dick? When you're mom said 'we'll see' it usually meant yes?... huh... awesome XD