| Reviews for Broken Soul |
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   Dragon0905 chapter 9 . 5/24 In some ways this is as much a massive change from canon as a crossover. However there are obviously many elements that are on point. The grammar was fairly on point. A few errors. Mostly it looked like spell check was used without much attention in a few cases. The overall plot has lots of promise. But I'm kinda confused on few points. Why is the shunshun the teleportation technique minato is famous for and not the flying thunder god? Why change minato's name to arashi mazama? Why the sudden change to kyubi's past to a lost family? |
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/16 More please |
| T M C A W chapter 9 . 6/21/2019 god this was an awesome story and I love naruto having tails wished it was longer but awesome all the same defiantly going to fav |
| Moon Dog 05 chapter 9 . 2/24/2019 Plz update soon |
| KPfan83 chapter 9 . 9/22/2018 LOVE THIS STORY AND I KNOW IT COULD END HERE BUT I WISH FOR IT TO CONTINUE OR EVEN A SEQUEL POSSIBLY BECOMING A HAREM FIC WITH NARUTO NOW BEING HALF DEMON AND THE WAY INO ACTED DURING THE CHUNNIN EXAMS EVEN ANKO COULD BE A POSSIBILITY |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2018 First, I'm never going to read a single line more of this cliche-filled trash. Second, Goodbye. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/24/2017 at first I really thought it would be now I see another kakashi is the reason behind giving kakashi the he doesn't deserve and hokage done much for him.I didn't see him giving any gift to about not giving gloves to hinata which were for the hyugas don't he make a glove using kyubis he is smart how can he not understand the perks of shadow a bullshit the age six naruto only learn academy jutsu and taijitsu...ultimately a slightly different naruto with same quality. |
| cespericueta35 chapter 9 . 2/8/2017 OMG finish this |
| kitsune7815 chapter 9 . 1/21/2017 wow please write more |
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/29/2016 Did you mean Hiraishin instead of shunshin? |
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/11/2016 *pouts* can we please have the next chapter, cause this is hilarious! It made me laugh throughout the whole thing. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/14/2016 I was laughing like a maniac when they were playing cards I was next to my friend and she was like *WTF* |
| SOULKID21 chapter 3 . 2/13/2016 I really like this series and I hope you can keep making more like it |
| napsterman23 chapter 9 . 11/25/2015 its been 10 yrs after last update. but the fic is great wounder what naruto does to the stupid council when he gets back to konoha. rate the fic a 8 of 10 :):):) |
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/27/2015 That was freaking awesome I get stop laughing it was hilarious |
