| Reviews for First Comes Marriage, Then Love? |
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Guest chapter 18 . 5/6 I love this story so much! |
Guest chapter 18 . 2/17 So beautiful |
mrs draco malfoy chapter 18 . 1/22 sooooooooooooooo cute ! |
Silly Hufflepuff chapter 2 . 1/6 I'm glad that after talking about the Mission at the Three Broomsticks while having dinner at Fred's apartment Fred told Hermione stories about George and himself I think it lighten things up even more. I hope Fred is right about Hermione not losing Ron's friendship because of this mission I hope Ron's love for Hermione helps him to understand how important this mission is. I'm afraid it not going to be that way though I think Ron's love for Hermione is going to make him jealous and childish I hope I'm wrong though if I'm right I know Fred and George will do what he said they do. |
Silly Hufflepuff chapter 1 . 1/5 Really liking this so far especially because Fred isn't dead and Harry, Ron, and Hermione have graduated Hogwarts before joining the Older and for now at least there is no Horcruxes hunt. I really wish that it was like this in the book not so much Fred's and Hermione's mission but the fact of Harry and the othe two being able to graduationed Hogwarts and no Horcruxes hunt. Anyway I like how both Hermione and Fred nere said a streat out no but both consider the prose and coins to this mission and I like how Fred put a little humor in to it by asking Hermione to marry him in the way that he did I think it quite wise of the to continue this conversation of this mission it shows that both are taking this very seriously which isn't so surprising for Hermione but is just a bit for Fred. |
MissWhoBlackbird chapter 7 . 1/22/2019 The one pairing that I love above all else in Harry Potter, is the Hermione-Harry brother-sister pairing |
Hannah-Bannana Weasley chapter 10 . 12/29/2018 I cried with The Notebook |
paiged825 chapter 14 . 12/8/2018 Yes, this chapter was the best, along with many. |
None shall pass chapter 18 . 10/2/2018 Omg I loved that it was very cute. But u misspelled some words |
GinW1105 chapter 7 . 9/12/2018 I just love this story! |
Iyanna Hinton chapter 5 . 7/10/2018 They already told her parents that they have been dating for two years. |
I didn't do it chapter 18 . 12/19/2017 If spell3 is worng snd most like will sorry but spelling is VERY heard for me and my SAMSUNG doesn't help matters especially when I'm already feeling like a loserso if any of my reviews had a lot of miss spelling and or bad grammar you now know why. Well Ron did act like and idiotic ass at first surprise surprise but he did finally let it seek it in and let the wise person that I always knew was in there take over and be happy and truly honestly happy for both Fred and Hermione. Which is good that he did finally less to the wise part of him for if his actions in the graveyard didn't killed, I WOULD have or a less mad him feel like ancomplete jackasspig-headed jerk. Fred or the healer was wise to put that spell on Hermione's bed otherwise she would have gotten up snd went right it to battle along side Harry. I'm do happy that none of the Weasley's were killed or their close friends although it saddens me that there were a few Death along the light side it would be unrealistic for all of those on the side of the light live and those on the dark die,as sad as it is those eho didn't make it will be honored and remembered. Love how Haley trund good hopefully that Ron will see that she is the one that can take the place that Hermione has in his heart I think she and him cacan n be real happy together and they bothdeserve it. Love Hermione brithday party Ron's and Haley's gift was a beautiful way of saying all a great friend and (in Haley's case) going to be great friend can say happy birthday and congratulations. Loved the story from being to end thinks for shearing it. |
Guest chapter 17 . 12/18/2017 Why does Ron have to be so clueless about the way Fred and Hermione feel about rach other? Why does he keep on insisting that she is going to fall for him? Is he really so blind that he can't see Fred's and Hermione's true feelings for each other? Or is he refusing to see it because he thinks Hermione should be with him? It is sad you know? No matter if it is him being so clueless about Fred and Hermione true feelings for each other or him refusing to see it because he thinks Hermione should be with him, for all three of them are going to get hrut been of which ever one it is. I think Genny made a very good point Ron is a big boy and he does need to grow up and so did George it really is only Fred and Hermione who know when and how to tell Ron but. Harry point of them not telling Ron was probably the best way to go even if I don't like it nor do I think Hermione nor Fred nor even Harry like it but as Harry said Lowell more or less) they all needed to be on their A game and Ron won't be able te on his A game if he is told the truth about Fred and Hermione feelings for sadly he let his ignorance get in the way and kick out any good sance of the wise True on that is somewhere inside him deed deed inside him but, it is there I know it is if he would just lesson to that wise voice. Ron ignorance and how he let it control him and cause him to more often then not hurt those he cares for and that is one of the few reasons why I think Fred does love Hermione more the Ron. I'm glad that Ron thought of having dinner withe the those closes to the you know family and close friends Im not surprised that he thought of it as I mentioned he is and clean be wise. I love the closeness of Fred and Hermione I like how they can know what the other is thinking or whay the other is going to say before saying it. I like how Hermione told Fred that she was going to fight by Harry's side and help kill the last Horocrux. I like how Fred didn't even try to argue with her not that it would have done any good of course but, only told her to be careful each and every time this kind of conversation came up. Heat that he feared for when the day would come that she go with Harry and Ron when the time came but, in a way I like it for it help him to make each and everyday count especially when he find out that the day was upon them. Hermione being pregnant should be a blessed happy occasion but, gavin to were asset is and what she going to be doing it more sad and scary. Now that Fred knows I bet he will go to where she is and bring her home I just don't know how and he more likely then not doesn't either. Does he even know were Harry, Ron, and Hermione went to? |
I didn't do it chapter 16 . 12/16/2017 Sadly Hermione didn't really find anything on Haley but she still tired even went on a few shopiing trips with her. I knew that eventhough she hadn't felt any unpleasant feeling tords Haley such as both Harry and Genny had. Like Harry and Hermione I too find Haley's love of snakes a little creepy her questions about Harry were even more so, and although Hermione's idea about why Haley always wearing long sleeves and little far fetched but it was one of three things that Hermione found odd and becouse of that I thought that Harry should have taken it in to more convinced. I only can think of a small hand full of people(not counting the Death Easterns) that know aboutway of hiding a Dark Mark and Hermione is one of them and if she says a Death Eastern can hind it then Ithink Harry and Fred should take that to mined I'm more upset with Harry then I am with Fred. The reason is I think obvious and that he ask her to get close to her and discover if she up to somthingthen once she tell him about her sleeve theory he push it back as little more then nothing that just aggravate me. I was a little upset with Fred as well but he was worried about her with over thinking and over working herslef and stressing herslef out he he does somthing as incredibly sweet as this beautiful thoughtful away trip for her to truly relax and be free of work intiredly for 15 days okay yhe he did do it partly out of jealousy bu but he many did it out of love and he really just wanted to be able to gave something that no one could (yes especially Ron but still) and he did I'm not talking about the...The Drity Monkey Dance aka sex (and yes that is what I really call it) but the trip and the true meaning of live behind it. I like reading about their trip and I love how you really didn't go in to real heavy detail about The Drity Monkey Dance. I bet you once they get back 5pthey tell or it so obvious that they don't have too. I wounder how Ron is going to take it? |
I didn't do it chapter 15 . 12/15/2017 Horcruxs had to say, heard to spell, heard to make, hard to find, hard to hard to kill,in other words Horcruxs are EVIL which explains why Voldemort had made 7 of those live despicable things. I'm glad that Hermione told Genny and Fred, Fred because now she have someone to help her out, so Fred want get to jealous, so he knows she trust and becouse he feels include, As for Genny will I don't know why I'm happy that Hermione told her I just know I am. Loved the pillow fight and LOVED the fact that Hermione wone ha down goes Fred ho ho ho. SO KNOW IT HITS RON that he as yet again act FOULISLY. Andit just come across him that Haley is maybe is not to be trusted Merlin only know pall that that red headed foul told her we know that git told her a LOT about Hermione and himself thatl foul foul foul FOUL. You it really ticks me off that Ron (fouless GIT) just assume that Hermione really didn't try to go with Harry as soon as he told her he is one to speak, Mister I must the live of my life to love me no hatter what it takes who thinks it a good idea to take advice from a complete stranger who ask that he send her reportshe about his love every move, the nurve of him. I dislike Haley from the beginning but knowing what she thinks about animals (big time animal lover) has me disliking her even more. Even though Hermione hasn't found any thing about Haley just yet I know that she still look smiply becouse of her trust in Harry. |