This does read like a dream. It's full of suspense - like you're walking in a corridor of doors and your nerves are taut waiting for someone to jump out at you from of them - at least this is how it made me feel. If that was your aim, then you succeeded.

Thanks for sharing!

A bit confusing. I still don't understand everyhitng about it.

I'm slightly lost, but this was good none the less. Ja ne

i know it's strange and abrupt. this is literally a word for word retelling of a dream i had. i guess if i wanted an actual story i would have fleshed it out a lot more but i couldn't seem to get past this part. i really don't do LFN stories very well...

I'll be honest..I think this had the potential of being really really good, but it was little obscure. And the ending was a little abrupt..sorry.I think the story idea is a really good one, so keep on writing.