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![]() ![]() What Happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You seriously need to keep writing! u can't leave us hanging like that! Oh and I think i know where the kidnapper dude's going next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can I just say that you really know how to shock and scare someone*shudders*. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO FAIR! you should totally finish it! come on no need to be left hanging! PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice, the "or so i thought" thing. catchy |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like the suspence at the end with the questions. it makes you want to read on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jess' parents are the Best! |
![]() ![]() ![]() like it) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, i like this its really good ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() What happened to ROB? I'm scared! I love your story by the way, it's so suspenseful and I haven't been able to look away from the computer since I started reading! Please post new chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG U CAN'T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT! uhh now im really worried! write more SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, clifhanger! i like this its well good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story, but I think that since it's Rob who just got captured, you should update sooner than usual, before we all go insane! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! NO! How could u do that to Rob! Jess Go find him! FYI Yes I do luv this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey that was pretty good. I love how she says. 'Now i'm going to try sleep so that i can find my friend. Again!' its just so funny. i love it. update soon. |