Cute !

How is it that no one I've come across has thought up this idea yet? It's such a good concept! X3

This was really, really cute. I love Kamui's eagerness, his faltering when he sees who chose 'Sakura' first (of course, of course), the way Subaru hung up on him (that was awesome)...It was all fabulous. I also like how you didn't get hung up on fancy diction or syntax; it was well-written, of course, but also simple enough to focus more on the plot than your grand vocabulary.

Excellent story!

I luv SuKam.

Hafta admit, I feel sorry for Kamui...

Poor Kamui...always the pawn that doesn't realize that he's bring used... Anyway, I really enjoyed this little fic. Great characterization and concept.

I love your writing style ~squee~ Poor Kamui, his feelings are so one-sided . Kudos for a job well done!

-Moshi Moshi Mai

Cute! Seishirou taking his time to call Subaru! And being hung up on!

I love your writing

Wow! I didn't expect it to be this good. I was kinda confused by the summary. Short and sweet, it leaves a lot of ideas to ponder. Nice work! BYE!

Lovely! My heart went 'aw' at the end.

silly me...

How sweet! It makes Kamui look kinda pansy, but that's accurate enough . The way you write Subaru is serene, and gracefully pretty. It's just a nice dynamic between Su and Kam-chan.

Hahaha! Lovely. Cute. Kamui is like a lost little puppy, isn't he? Too true. He follows Subaru around like my little sister follows me around. (Really, the way Kamui acts reminds me too too much of Kuropi/Hokuto-Fashion, it's scary.) But in thei interview CLAM said Subby-kun and Kamui were like sisters, so it's no surprise they remind me of my sister and me. (giggles)

Ooh, nice. Poor Kamui. He's like a puppy.

Loverly.