Great plot and chapter

Well Roy finially becomes he Fuhrer and does he EVER actually do paper work?

plz write more

comments: continuity issues: Ed got transported to Munich in 1921. how did he get into 21st century Europe? Also, Al was stuck in Munich with Ed. Roy gave up his post as president, and Izumi died. Al needs circles on his gloves, The gate has been sealed for good, and Ed never lost his automail.

All in all though, a good story. Am planning to upload a similar story myself, but with plenty of differences for a smashing good read.

Oyasuminasai!

Hiromu Arakawa

Well alright then. Hope the story turns out well, and best of luck to you in re-writing everything!

So what if it's been six years since your last update? I love this story, and I hate to see a good story abandoned. I hope you didn't. Either way, I hope I see an update soon! Please?

I really want to write a rewrite of this. The concept is awesome, but you have a lot of misspellings and need to have more description and eloquence.

wat happened to ur updating? it has been years! love the story tho. please update!

You need more work on the dialog. You have trouble keeping people in character, and using words other than "...he said..."

You have a good plot idea, you just need to learn how to get it across in an interesting manor. I suggest using a thesaurus.

really good! plz update soon! or at least tell us wat's going on!

~MxM

interesting...I wonder how Bradley got to the other side of the gate...I wonder if they will ever beat Voldemort or that they be transported back to their own world?...anyways please update soon...I can't wait to read your next chapter

...wow...

well, if ya ever gonna update, please do it soon.

it's a really good story but you overuse 'ya'! It seems not a single conversation takes place without at least two 'ya's.

allright, i will take a few deep breaths before yelling at you.

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UPDATE!