It was dark and I loved it.

Oh wow - just stumbled across this! I don't usually read much Star Wars fanfic - usually I read comedy ones, but this was brilliant.

This is the first starwars fanfic i've read. lols...

It's great. i liked the longing, bitterness and scorn.

Great job deepy

I really enjoyed it and think this is a brilliant first fiction! Ek but what do I know? Maybe it's better than I think... Anyhow I don't see how their love was effecting each other for the worse. It was kind of romantic appart from the fact Padme was doubting her feelings?

This was AWESOME! You captured this so well. I loved it. such (despair)pain caused by such love is just poetic. That is what love is, a type of pain. You did great. Her feelings just poured off the monitor. GREAT JOB.

wow!

this is really powerful

the way you describe padme's pain is so vivid it almost hurts

like it a lot, keep up the great work!

You tread a delicate line with the T rating... but nonetheless very good. The "uncivilised" comment was perfect- I think you really revealed so much about his character in just that one phrase. The fragmenting wasn't a cause for worry- it was pretty negligible. Grammatically the only thing I could find to criticise- hopefully, constructively- is your tendency to sometimes use commas where you should use semi-colons (;).

What a beautiful story!

"Yet one can’t kill those who are already dead."

*stares* Such a beautiful and terrifying sentence.

"For in the end, it was the only way to forget."

*sniff*

Beautiful fic...very sad and deep, with well conveyed emmotions...great job!

Nice. I think their relationship would have turned into something like this had Padme lived...obsession and jealousy would have become possession and madness. Wow, though...

This was so interesting and well written! I think this is a very realistic look at what could have happened to Padme and Anakin's relationship...had she chosen to follow him. Lovely!

I liked that, I normally don't read star wars fics nowadays...too many new fans, but this story was intense and real. Good Job!