| Reviews for The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse |
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   WritingRin chapter 6 . 7/19 Oh my god where did that level of flirting come from Kagome! It’s a good thing they’re both a little more mature in this AU. |
| WritingRin chapter 3 . 7/19 Umm I am giggling a lot because it’s a “caterpillar” woman not a centipede?! I’m retreading this for the third time and I just noticed that |
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/2 I don't think I like how Kagome treats Shippo. In the anime/manga, she does let him get away with too much, true, but she's downright cruel to him in this story. Shippo is just a little boy. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/2 I do really like this alternate version, but I think you went really overboard with the italics in Yura's speech. She was taunting and playful, but I don't think it warranted this many italics. |
| Wolf Goddess Reyith chapter 3 . 2/1 Two things: one, given how Inuyasha feels about being a half-demon, I'm not sure he would admit to it so willingly when Kagome asked what type of demon he was. Two, why didn't the "heel, boy" command work? I was under the impression that it could be any word she wanted to use. |
| Alechaos Ogigio 2 chapter 86 . 1/22 amazing from start to finiish. riveting. |
| Lady Aya chapter 86 . 9/30/2019 Ah it could have ended well being his dad and all to see a very rumpled inyu... No that was absolute 28 days of reading... 28! I mssed all of sumtembers releases to be like no... I'm invested... I must finish. And my heart broke and laughed at the same time... Loves it. |
| Lady Aya chapter 85 . 9/30/2019 I was crying so much my eyes hurt... This hurt.. but honeymoon not long enough... You got me there |
| Lady Aya chapter 83 . 9/30/2019 Noooooooooo |
| Lady Aya chapter 77 . 9/28/2019 Been reading this for like 30 days straight and I want to tell you... This chapter... Fuc&ed me up.. like I'm crying... |
| Kyzadon chapter 22 . 8/13/2019 Incredible work so far. I'm completely enthralled. Your writing is so beautiful and you've introduced me to an addictive and suspenseful au which has me eagerly anticipating what's gonna happen next! Thanks. |
| Tsukinohimeusagi chapter 60 . 4/22/2019 Jtesorejsfnwkaejbkawjfae omggggggggg Awesome chapter ! |
| Uzushiogakure chapter 3 . 4/21/2019 Stupid |
| Tsukinohimeusagi chapter 58 . 3/12/2019 That’s was a great chapter! I can’t believe Fen wanted to fight her so much. I guess it makes sense but holy cow |
| Tsukinohimeusagi chapter 57 . 3/12/2019 Oh man, things are getting crazy again |
