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icewolf chapter 2 . 8/19/2013 Please continue this is a good story |
Dog999111 chapter 2 . 11/26/2010 This is so cool plz continue |
Xj9 chapter 2 . 10/20/2009 Great story, I like it until now! Update soon! |
vbn45 chapter 2 . 7/20/2009 this is such a good story so far! I wish you would continue it! |
otogii chapter 2 . 7/14/2009 hey! dont start something that could be totally awsome then dont finish it! if worst comes to worse just do a rough slab of a summary of what would have happened if you did write it out just to give your story closure... |
rimera chapter 2 . 6/19/2006 sniff... I miss this story... I can't wait for the next update. |
Ze Queen chapter 2 . 9/10/2005 Ya know, I've been waitin' a long time for this chappie, and it's good to see that you finally updated! Lookin' forward to the next, and PLEASE update more quickly than you did last time! |
KunochiDreamer chapter 2 . 8/18/2005 Nice chapter. |
digigirl02 chapter 2 . 8/11/2005 Its really good. |
Taki-Sama chapter 2 . 8/11/2005 lovely chapter, keep up the good work! |
GoHan'S FaN GurL chapter 1 . 7/10/2005 Seems like this is goin gr8 story! can't wait till u update! |
GildedSky chapter 1 . 7/3/2005 I really enjoy what you're doing with this...it's the first story I've read that addresses the "what if Raditz kidnapped Gohan?" question. You write very well-I like the consistent voice and appreciate your good grammar. I like the little changes you've made to the story, I don't feel you changed the storyline too much, but it's different enough to make it distinctive. I really liked the attention to detail, especially the last line of the file on "Kakarot." That was neat. Anyway, looking forward to your next update! Rock on! |
Goku's Mistress chapter 1 . 7/2/2005 - Hiya! I really liked this fic, and hope ya update soon! I think you may have spelled Kakarot wrong, as i do believe its Kakkarot. Not sure though, so other than that, this is realy good! |
Ze Queen chapter 1 . 7/2/2005 Hm... so, "Lorz" is Gohan, right? Um, I don't see any misspellings so your safe there... Raditz wasn't portrayed as well as possible, but good for a start... You didn't give much backstory, how did Raditz capture Gohan? You could have changed a lot of things to make the story more interesting. Uh, not bad though. Queen Freaky Sono Youkai Mecchen! |
Kinoha chapter 1 . 6/29/2005 Oh I can't wait for more! How will Gohan ...uh excuse me, Lorz react to the fact that his father is Kakarott and Raditz his uncle. ( About this chapter I concluded Gohan doesn't know that Raditz is his uncle, right?) About the Japanese spelling... It's Chikyuu. (Heh! I am a walking-talking japanese dictionary so feel free to ask me of words if you want!) I can't wait to read the other chapter! ( I'm a little repetitive, aren't I?) Writies! |