Reviews for Something Good
icewolf chapter 2 . 8/19/2013
Please continue this is a good story
Dog999111 chapter 2 . 11/26/2010
This is so cool plz continue
Xj9 chapter 2 . 10/20/2009
Great story, I like it until now!

Update soon!
vbn45 chapter 2 . 7/20/2009
this is such a good story so far! I wish you would continue it!
otogii chapter 2 . 7/14/2009
hey! dont start something that could be totally awsome then dont finish it! if worst comes to worse just do a rough slab of a summary of what would have happened if you did write it out just to give your story closure...
rimera chapter 2 . 6/19/2006
sniff... I miss this story... I can't wait for the next update.
Ze Queen chapter 2 . 9/10/2005
Ya know, I've been waitin' a long time for this chappie, and it's good to see that you finally updated! Lookin' forward to the next, and PLEASE update more quickly than you did last time!
KunochiDreamer chapter 2 . 8/18/2005
Nice chapter.
digigirl02 chapter 2 . 8/11/2005
Its really good.
Taki-Sama chapter 2 . 8/11/2005
lovely chapter, keep up the good work!
GoHan'S FaN GurL chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
Seems like this is goin gr8 story! can't wait till u update!
GildedSky chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
I really enjoy what you're doing with this...it's the first story I've read that addresses the "what if Raditz kidnapped Gohan?" question. You write very well-I like the consistent voice and appreciate your good grammar. I like the little changes you've made to the story, I don't feel you changed the storyline too much, but it's different enough to make it distinctive. I really liked the attention to detail, especially the last line of the file on "Kakarot." That was neat.

Anyway, looking forward to your next update! Rock on!
Goku's Mistress chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
- Hiya! I really liked this fic, and hope ya update soon! I think you may have spelled Kakarot wrong, as i do believe its Kakkarot. Not sure though, so other than that, this is realy good!
Ze Queen chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
Hm... so, "Lorz" is Gohan, right? Um, I don't see any misspellings so your safe there... Raditz wasn't portrayed as well as possible, but good for a start... You didn't give much backstory, how did Raditz capture Gohan? You could have changed a lot of things to make the story more interesting. Uh, not bad though.

Queen Freaky

Sono Youkai Mecchen!
Kinoha chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Oh I can't wait for more! How will Gohan ...uh excuse me, Lorz react to the fact that his father is Kakarott and Raditz his uncle. ( About this chapter I concluded Gohan doesn't know that Raditz is his uncle, right?)

About the Japanese spelling... It's Chikyuu. (Heh! I am a walking-talking japanese dictionary so feel free to ask me of words if you want!) I can't wait to read the other chapter! ( I'm a little repetitive, aren't I?)

Writies!
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