i like it they are soo cute! one question... does quat,tro and fei actually know that duo is shini?

This is so cute you should continue

Love this! Too bad you decided not to continue it, I'd like to see more. Oh well, once again great story!

this last chapter i think is my favorite, please write more?

aw, i was worried that i'd cry for a while, but it had such a nicer ending. one thing, i sugest re-reading your works aloud after they go through spell-check because there are a lot of words that got changed into similar sounding words. it isn't really obvious, but they do change the meaning of a few key sentences. other than that, nice job!

Sorry, didn't see you had written more, thus the previous review. Still I must say, that you are very bad at wrapping things up - I mean in every chapter the ending was so abrupt that it made me want to break smth. And it would have been better if you wrote some more about the feelings, not only naming them. And some explanations as to how and why Relena was there or how she managed to make a spell would be good, too. All in all you just need to elaborate thing more, as description is a very good thing. But the whole idea was good and Shini was gorgeous.

Hugs,

Anya

I review only for the love of Shini. o Joke

Anyways, good idea, but bad ending. I think it would have been better if you continued this one. The 'I love you' thingie was very out of place. The reaction to Duo's true form should have been more pronounced, you have a very good style of writing, so I know that you can do better. Hope you would continue this one,

Hugs,

Anya

update

story moves kinda fast..but it is a good one..update soon

hey nice fic...hope to read he chapter seven...really really soon!

This is a good fic. I'm glad I was actually able to finish reading what you have before I actually had to go to bed. I look forward to reading the rest of it.

So exciting. Too bad my mom is making me get off and go to bed. Maybe I can finsih it tomorrow.

It made me smile. I like it so far. If you haven't figured it out from my other reviews, I'm not that hard of a person to please. Plus I really like reading so if I really didn't like something I'd let you know.

I like this fic, it's fun to read! I'll watch for your next update with anticipation!

Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 24, 2005 23:26 CDT

Rating(s):

Style of Writing: 10 of 10

Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10

Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10

Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10

Overall Rating: 10 of 10

Comment/Review:

I can't find the words to say just how great this story is .So I just thought I would rate it a perfect 10..Please update.