Hahaha. Ha. Wow I'm ruined now. I'm just going to believe in my head that Wally does die or something because this is hecking over and I can't change that. I could never replicate your amazing style of writing for my own personal amusement in an attempt to finish this incredible story. It's over, we're done. I'm gone.

I really hope you'd update. Since after reading several chapters the plot finally thickens, and I was hoping for answers to a lot of questions. Hope you would still update. This is going on to be a good Flash/Wally fic and I really want to know what happens next.

Dude plz updated this story man,it's awesome!u just can't leave it hanging like this

Come on, 2 years? you can't just end it now .

um... so you should deff finish this. you are an amazing writer and this is an intriguing story. i'd hate to see it be left incomplete.

~lanie

interesting

-sigh- I guess you won't be completing this fic after all. It's brilliant, and I wish it would be, because oh my goodness it's fantastic.

I like other people apparently, have found this fic a little hard to follow. Probably because I haven't watched JLU for ages. I don't know everyone's civilian names, I can barely attach their codenames to their pictures and when you only use their real first names, it gets a little muddled for me. If you could maybe throw in their codename's every once and a while, especially for people like Booster Gold and Elongated Man and people who are sideline characters, that would be so helpful. And Lydia, she had me confused for a really long time now too. But I mean, it's totally clear now.

Other than the slight confusion over names, you've done an amazing job at crafting this brilliant mystery surrounding Wally. Everyone is in character (although I'm finding Batman a little more antagonistic than he was in the show) and their interactions are gorgeous. Wally is excellent in this, and him and Dick have been making me grin the whole time, even when they're fighting.

I'm just dying to know who put so much effort into framing Wally and why. It's gut-wrenching, what's happened to him, and now he's being consumed by the Speed Force (it calling to him, brilliant, by the way), and getting more ill and then getting shot and charged with felonies. You sure know how to grab an audience, that's for sure. He was losing all that weight because he was being pulled into the Speed Force, right?

This fanfiction is brilliant. I think I've said that a couple times by now, but it's true. And I so, so hope you continue on eventually, because it's amazing and I so want to know what's going to happen to Wally. It kills, knowing that this hasn't been updated August of last year. I'll just cross my fingers and hope that you'll regain interest, I suppose. I can't even imagine how it's going to end, so I can't even give myself my own resolution. You've written the mystery too well! -flails-

You're a genius, this fic is fantastic, and please, re-post as soon as you can. I would absolutely appreciate it :)

-Maggie

realy interesting story, though, it was a little too confusing for most of the first 13 chapters. Maybe that was just me. Please tell me that you are still planning on finishing it at some point in time in the future...

So Wally's sister died, his parents kidnapped and he's somewhere on Earth...

This is such a great story! UPDATE!

So glad to see a new chapter of this! I decided to reread the whole thing to refresh myself, and wow! This is so well done, and I love seeing the plot points come together. Dinah's real reason for being upset with Kara, and the connection with Wally's freeze. I'm so eager to see what happens in the next installments!

Great job!

alright this isnt an easy story to follow, not for me at least, but its because of that, that its so cool and twists here and there,what you believe to be certain, its not longer like that, human characters,not losing their essent...

And the best part, is that you are writing it again! Love the fact that bart's in the story, and i dont think i'm wrong if i suppose that he'll be an important part or the key maybe, into finding our redhead.

Poor Dickie, btw. Keep on writing!

Complicated...I really like this. Except that's it...already? Gawd...look at the time! oy.

Something is accelerating Wally's metabolism and let's not forget those hand marks on his arms...

Wally is being absorbed...or doing the absorbing?

Ha! Vindication! I KnEW something was off the way everyone stayed away from Wally (by force if necessary) and only Nightwing came by. Manipulation again.

Looks like Vic wasn't paranoid after all...conspiracies everywhere.

The Oa thing does remind of what happened to Barry during his 'death'.

Speaking of which...#4 Rebirth out today. I hope somebody does scans.

Nobody hurts Wally like Wally fans. :P (Except for maybe DC.) 0.0

Lydia is reminding me of Fran (Magenta)