AWESOME

great

This was the ultimate best story since I was reading both DBV, and DBAF: The Alpha Tours! Thank you for the ultimate treat of a lifetime. Excellent Job!

Genius! It was truly genius to make it go exactly the way you did it! Great job!

Fantastic awesome job! It was the pinnacle of Perfection!

Great work of written art! In other words I consider writing stories like this one a great type of written art! So great job! I am a proud fan!

Very well done on the descriptive element of the story so far! So far so good!

I thought this chapter was very cute and wonderful! And most of all excitingly fantastic! It really is a thrilling grand and excitingly fantastic mystical adventure! Just like the original dragon Ball created in nine teen eighty two by Akira Tori Yama and his crew! Excellente! Which translates from itallian to english! For example Excellent is how we spell it in english, but in Either Flourentine itallian language, they add the e at the word! So great job with the writing of this story plus the real expressionism and symbolism is absolutely scrumptious when it comes the the fabulous flavors of the whole plot and story along with its storyline at its very pinnacle best! Keep up the best work! And good luck hold your head up high and go get those villains and succeed in what you do best! Show them how it is done the right way!

I absolutely love this story so far! So here is my opinions belief, or quote! "So far so great it does not matter what anyone thinks of you because they are not you!" This is a quote I picked up from the person known as David Thomas! He is the author of DBV! Now this is a quote that my mother reminded me of! " When things get tough, think positive thoughts and believe in yourself and you will succeed and go far!" So good luck and thank you for this wonderful story/series. I know that you will succeed at anything in your life/future! Do not let your pressure or stress get the best of you! In the words of my best friend from high school whom I have known since I met her at the prep rally all those years ago, " Kick butt and you will succeed!" In other words do not give up because you can succeed at anything you desire through your dreams! As long as you keep holding on hold strong, keep working very hard and all good things come to those who wait with patiences and truth and love along with a positive attitude! You will achieve your absolute goals! And nothing will get passed you or stand in your way as long as you clear your mind and yourself happy and very positive with a pure good heart! Goodbye and good luck with all of your hard work!

To make up for all the times I forgot to review, I say every chapter from 1-24 for the first and the second stories that is of this one, I give a reward of 10,000 as a final gift so far! Good luck now! I will be reading chapter 25 after this review! Excellent story completely so far!

Great idea! Fantastic story!

Excellent chapter! It was so brilliant!

So far I love this whole story as much as I enjoyed the first one! It was awesome! Really perfect beyond comparison!

Another really awesome series from you. I was pretty sad in the end when Cell died for her. I know that he appears again later, but still...

Great story. I loved your New Destiny series.

Wow, what an ending. It was both sad and happy, so I guess bittersweet would be the right word. I still need to go back and read the first story.