Reviews for Once Upon an Alternate Dimension
Guest chapter 14 . 7/11/2019
Damn please finish this!
Takani-sensei's Nurse chapter 14 . 11/10/2013
MORE! Finish the story, ye author!
mw chapter 14 . 9/29/2011
this is absolutely amazing
KiaCoral chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
AAAAAH, IT'S GREAT! THE IDEAS AND EVERYTHING HERE ARE GREAT! XD

SOOOO MUUUUCH FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN! XD

i hope to see you continue this story, YOU LEFT IT AT SUCH A GOOD PART! XD

anyway, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Antigear chapter 14 . 10/31/2009
Please continue this story, its exciting and you always leave me wanting more!
Coketown chapter 14 . 10/30/2009
I haven't even read through the whole thing yet, but I did notice it'll be almost a year since you updated. Please continue with this story, I'm enjoying it so so so much, and I've never really been a fan of fantasy!
kiomaro chapter 14 . 12/21/2008
Love your 't wait for you to continue it. Hope to see some of HiruMamo. Anyway good going.I Hope that you will update new chapter quick.
ONIX-21 chapter 14 . 11/4/2008
cool another awesome chapter

its great that ur bringing all the different teams in to it

love the aliens lol

great work!

yay Suzuna the pixie Taki the gremlin :D

Hiruma's back! yay!

cant wait to see wats gona appen next

hope u update soon! XD
MazokuTenshi chapter 14 . 11/4/2008
“Oh no commander. You haven't neutralized all the intruders,” a sneering voice said.

In almost slow motion the captain chair moved turned about revealing the once person she least expected to see here on this ship.

Hiruma was lounged back legs crossed, fingers together in a devious pondering way, with the most sinister grin, “You are dealing with the worse intruder to date right here,”

Love that one! Very cute chapter, again. I loved Suzuna here, I just wanna hug her lil pixieness! (Next to Rui and Hiru of course!) XD
Jillian Leonhart chapter 14 . 11/3/2008
Haff...

An update! At last!

I love the 'Watt-tron' part!

And pixie-Suzuna was really great idea and it suits her well! And the last scene, Hiruma rules!
ChibiKakei chapter 14 . 11/2/2008
-high fives- lol you weren't the only one to not update until like a year later XD I just did recently too, and still working on updating the rest~
DarkestCornerOfMyMind chapter 14 . 11/2/2008
FINALLY! An update! Welcome back!
Jillian Leonhart chapter 13 . 10/31/2008
OMG!

NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!

you havn't been updating 4 ages!
MazokuTenshi chapter 13 . 10/31/2008
WAAI! This is a very cute story indeed! I love Rui and Hiruma here! Hope you update soon! I was laughing while reading every chapter! Very nice!

(I wonder, will Hakushuu be dinos? XD)
Kazz the 13th chapter 13 . 8/9/2008
Okay I am lovin' this! XD I stayed up all night yesterday reading this then fell asleep and am now doing the same thing! I am LMFAO! Grunt Gnomes? Haha Dragon? Musashi the SAVAGE? HAHAHAHAH!~! Oh please continue with this story as best you can! I can't wait for more! You have no idea how much I wanna see how you are going to introduce Taki, Suzuna, and Ishimaru [if you haven't already introduced him that is P] XD And yay Hiruma! I'm still trying to figure out who is from the 'original' dimension though... Right now its a tie between: Hiruma
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