Thank you for 8 chapters. Its never too late to finish. Lord of the Rings took 14 years. Chapters 1,2,3 took 30 years to come out. Please conclude the adventure. Once a writer. Always a writer. Lucky for us, Lucas kept his determination going.
May the Force Be With You

Wow, I just read this story for like the millionth time and I still love it. I just signed up so that's why my other review on here is not listed as me but it was.

Luke's sudden "mini-fall" was a little OOC considering he just stood there accepting the truth and his death while his father attacked him.

... Well shit. $10 he's gonna feint/ break down crying and STILL love his dad.

Hell no

Hoh boy...

Dear Erianna,
In this paragraph I believe that you were trying to say
"can hardly believe there's nothing to say." Vader retorted humorously."
But what you ACTUALLY said was
"I can hardly belief there's nothing to say." Vader retorted humourously."
spot the mistakes?
Signed,
MaraBellaEvergreen

Ok, another spelling reminder from the annoying GriffinRyderGirl :P… 'meditating' not 'mediating'. Please fix it.

"'What games do you play, in your hours alone, my father? Whatdarkness conceals AnakinSkywalker,behind that mask?'" so you might want to fix that.
Sincerely,
GriffinRyderGirl
P.S
the previous review was also written by GriffinRyderGirl (A.K.A me) but I accidentally posted it.

Dear Erianna,
This is a very intriguing story. However, you keep not capitalizing the 'F' in father when Luke talks to him. Also, you didn't put spaces in this paragraph "

moree

I never get tired of re-reading this story

more

i hope u write more

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I'm upset that this story was never finished as it was one of the best Luke/Vader fics! Ugh! Oh well. I will just enjoy what is up of it. ) Fantastic job!