Reviews for Mine
rapunzel-chan chapter 22 . 1/6/2008
Great fic! I'm usually not a big fan of the whole native thing, but this was well written, not to mention hot! *fans self*
Jaks-Girl chapter 22 . 9/21/2007
Whoa... This story is... unique.

To say the bloody least. _

I must admit, as good as it was, it was not particulary my tastes as 'Lighting' had been. It was just a little off-kilter-throwing to my brain, and a little of it had to be re-read to wrap my head around it. I never really got used to it, but it was very intersting, how you incorporated all of those items and ideas into the story.

But, damn, was it not good! It was intese, tense, and you had very many fiddly bits in the story that sent me into uncontrollable giggle fits. None of which I can remember in specific right now. But I do promise I did! I almost fell off my chair last night while reading. _

All in all, good, but still a little awkward.

~Jaks-Girl
Jewelled-Wolf chapter 22 . 5/20/2007
Last chapter? -shakes author for more-

This was absolutely wonderful as usual and I love how you ended it!
rin chapter 22 . 4/9/2007
whoa!

Congrats on finishing, Kitty \./

that was pretty cheap trick with orphans reunion and all, but it did surprise me nonetheless, so I guess it worked its magic :3 I'd still love to read more about Sheriff and Deputy ;) Go go write one-shots wo!
JohnneyAntonelli chapter 21 . 1/16/2007
sad...
JohnneyAntonelli chapter 20 . 12/13/2006
Oh... a short one... but still good!

Oh goodness...

When are Squall and Seifer just gonna fuck and get it over with?
JohnneyAntonelli chapter 19 . 11/24/2006
Aw...shortness makes me sad...

Why does everyone bash Rinoa? lol

But, I AM happy that now Squall and Seifer can do the nasty.
JohnneyAntonelli chapter 18 . 11/1/2006
NO ME GUSTA!

Irvine can't be Zell's little bitch!

Well, he kinda already is... But that's not right.

I can't believe he just forgave Zell for fucking DRUGGING him!
TheGoldenAppleofAsgard chapter 18 . 11/1/2006
How you can have only 54 reviews for such a brilliant and original fiction I'll never know...
JohnneyAntonelli chapter 17 . 10/1/2006
oh

my

GOD!

wow, i figured you'd bring Quitsis into this story, but not as a PIMP! lol

I love how Seifer and Squall are in the story more now too!

I DON'T like how everything that's going on with them is so mysterious though. /:

And 'Lulubell'?

That made me smile.
Rae chapter 15 . 9/17/2006
Aie, this story is so awesome I would like to drag it off to a cheap motel and have its babies! No Rly. I mean that. Keep up the good work! :D
Neoneoneobanana chapter 15 . 8/23/2006
Cute. Keep up the great work, babes.
Neoneoneobanana chapter 14 . 8/23/2006
Nice chapteroh.
Neoneoneobanana chapter 13 . 8/23/2006
Yeah, whats Irv gonna fo when he turns into an old fogey?

And what about his old folks?
Neoneoneobanana chapter 12 . 8/23/2006
Cute. Dude. Really.
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