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All 3 of these stories are BRILLIANT! Reading them is like actually living an episode, and you have Darian Fawkes so perfect! HOWEVER! you need to write MORE invisible man stories! as there were only 2 series so where else can he continue to live! Darien in danger must continue! he needs you. Please write more stories. Many Thanks.

Awesome. I enjoyed this just as much as the first installment.

Very nicely written.

cool.

wow! you should definatley publsh!

i mean it! that was a bloody good fic! whens obsession comingout then?

lols

mimi

Argh! You call that an ending? That's a bigger cliffhanger than before! *Sulks*

...it was a good story though...

Better be bloody well soon or I'll be forced to do something drastic.

Most excellently done, well written, and well executed.

this is incredible! the tension, the humor, the plot! continue, please?

Wow, that was exciting!

I'm also still reading this, even though I haven't reviewed lately. Too many stories to read and so little time. *shakes head*

I'm sure Darien and the others will find a way to get him and Frankie out of this. Well, they just can't shoot Darien. :)

I'm hoping for an update.

Soo... is this something that you've given up on, or has RL simply interfered?

I know I lurk a lot, and I'm sure a lot of other people do too (we're those pesky non-commentors). But it would be absolutely fabulous for this to continue. Because I love it greatly.

no! they have darien! hobbes where the hell are you when you're needed!

keep it coming!

mimi

Medical issues. Pain. Anguish. Torture. Sacifice.

Whee. Fun.

Uh-oh, D's in trouble... again. *taps foot impatiently* So, where's the rest?

Two words - uh oh!

Sorry I've been so slack with reviewing. Last I knew there were only two chapters! But it's always nice to get back and see more. Oh yeah - good as always.