So, its like a hotel room key?

No rush just take your time

Its amazing story so amazing its good and how fluff they are,and kinda funny when odd and the oc your such a amazing fanfiction writer keep writing I'll love to read! :)

dude this is like heart breaking if i were yumi i would have been crying the whole trip and that locket was so sweet, nice effects. you have got to write a whole book i about it.

Ebony Redeyes(TswanaGirl12) from Botswana.

Awesome...

This was pretty good. The OOC thing, lil iffy but it's overall decent and I liked it

LOLZ! THE RETARDS ARE BACK! LMAO! I LUV IT!

omfg! thAT WAS HILLARIOUS I WAS JUST SITTING THER LAUGHING MY ASS OFF! I SWEAR I ALMOST FELL OFF MY CHAIR WHEN ODD WAS SCREAMIMG! LOLZ! LMAO! xD

hey, i liked the chapter! i re4ad this story beofre but i didn't read the last capter and forgot botu th story for awhile im writing my frist fanfiction im noyl on chapter three though i ahvent uploaded anything yet. it's hard to concetrate on reading and wroting while my friends are over we all decided to make it but, they take breaks while i type and they put on this music and movies then tis hard to concentrate on writing. lolz! bye! x]

some of ur characters might be demented, but ur still kinda demented, where is the drama! the drama nobody pays u 2 give!

i thought thankyou in japanese was arigato, or something like that, anyway, if it weren't for the fact that like you ALREADY have a chapie up, I would kill you! but u were prepared for me! its like 4:45, like an hour since i last remember reviewing u, and dude i am getting so good at typing im not looking any more! wow, that is sad! now im like some pro, cuz i spend like all my time writing, im sad, i have no life

ok, that whole it's not Yumi thing is like the meanist thing EVA!

HAHA! you thought i might to the fill it all up thing, hey, maybe i will, cuz im EVIL! MWUAHAHAHAHAHA!

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HEHE, JK, did u really think i would do that? HEHE, u realize it is like 3:45! WOW! I must be either in a serius episode of nocturnalnisnissnisnaniss (HEHE! I like that word, it sounds weird!) or incredibly board (probably both, thankyou 4 entertaining me while my family sleeps, not realizing that i can't)

YAY! they are comeing to CALI! are they still here! IMPORTANT QUESTION HERE! *looks around*

u won't really get this but i'll say it anyway

I was going to send another reveiw, cuz, any time i think of something, i can forget like that (snaps fingers like a girlygirl like sister*) so that happened, and i almost started the next chapie without reviewing, hey, do you like it when insane people like me do the review thing like EVERY chapter, or so it seems that way, cuz it is like 2:30 in the morning where i am, no I don't have jet lag, im nocternal! but anyway i was going to say... wait, what was i going to say... oh ya

mesa live in california (i had to throw a starwars quote in there, my sis-the 1 who snapps her fingers snobbishly even thought the first time i wasn't doing it like that) and i was almost a model, and hey, this is the first i heard we had subways now! we have tollies and trains in San Deigo, and San Francisco, i live like 2 hours from San Deigo, and like 6 from San Fransico! hey, did you know u can make a review up to like 10 characters! I once made a review that filled it all up, i used LOTS of dots, like these : so it looked like more than there really was, well now im probably annoying you, so I'll move on to the next chapie (sits in chair with head down and puppy dowg face that nobody can resist and says: please don't be annoyed. oh, hey, this thing is making me dizzy, is it making you- I'll shut up now.

wow! (and i mean that in a shocked way too) how did you get that many reviews anyway? I guess I need to post here from now on. I love these types of stories, one had Ulrich moving to Ohio for a soccer thing! and in their adult-hood Yumi and Ulrich met up agian. I would write something like that, but I prefer a main character and an OC