I have no words. I love it as it is because I can imagine every little scene.

rkmerley

heartwrenching...

Ohmigod. So awesome.

I really, really, really love this. I can just sort of FEEL the sadness and almost-happiness and...lots of things. It's hard to describe. I'm sad 'cause you're KILLING Iruka and Kakashi, but at the same time happy because there ARE worse ways.

~Making no sense~

BHS

Sad and sweet at the same time.

sweet, in a very very morbid way. nice detail about the spinal fluids. ;

This was sad! now I'm melancholy, I didn't know this was a deathfic. T_T It was good noless. I liked the way you described Iruka's feelings.

AW! i loved it! it was so cute sad happy kind of thing...i hpe you write lots more kakashixiruka stories!

aw... sad and cute at the same time. Lovely.

I like this fic. I don't know what else to say.

That was so sweet. If it weren't over so soon, I would have been crying. (It was very close...if I weren't at work right now, I definitely would have cried.) I'm about to read more of your fics because they're good and I can't wait to see what else you can come up with :)

Whoops - so that's what happened before. I need to read things in the right order. I like this one, too - descriptive enough to give a picture, but not purple.

_ poor them, but nicely written, argh! need to read the next one

That was really sad but also kawii in a way. I really liked this fic you did an aewsome job _

God. This is amazing! A mix of beautifully haunting, sad and sweet.

Please continue. *begs and tries to bribe with hot choc*

Wow. Harsh and sad. Interesting.