Well, I don't know much about poems, but this was very charged, very telling about what Hao and Yoh mean to each other. I liked that. Unless I interpreted it wrong, than I'm embarrassed by my own sappiness!

I loved this. It's been a while, but are you going to write that third chapter to the fic accompagning this? Please do!

I...wow. The only thing I can accurately say is WOW. I loved that poem so much. Beautiful imagery. I was actually thinking of finding a fic featuring them.

I loved it! I loved Sempre Com Irmao also! So, yeah; awesome!

beautyfold

OMG! I LOVE that poem! its so cute! it reminds me of the song Brother my Brother lolz!

- xImperfectlyX

really beautiful poem *sigh*

so good! i'm a poet myself and i absolutely adore your work! it's so good! wah! i love you! (not really)

Beautiful! you are really good at this! I tried writing a poem for MythicBrotherhood: Battle of the 'Blood' that started ok but kinda bottomed out cause I can't rhyme to save my life! But you have a wonderful talent and I enjoyed this very much. Well Done! Applause!

this is a really nice poem.

i love the way it rhymes.

it sounds like a song inmy head, so melodic.

its such a sweet poem too.

it makes me want to read your fic.

so. i probably will.

there are some word there i really like.

this poem it really wasome.

i love it.

Ja ne~

~ Kari ~