Good story.

Great plot, but I feel like the story went a little but too fast. It feels like the story is incomplete, and I would love to see a sequel. Keep writing!

Erik is being so cold torwards Christine hopefully everything will get better.

Is Christine bipolar or something? Lol anyway this is a great story so far!

Inuyasha is a very popular manga and anime series. I happen to be a HUGE fan of it. I'm not surprised that you haven't heard of it. Most people haven't heard of it in my school. So you're not the only one in the world who hasn't heard of it ;)

His dinning room is PINK? PINK? Of all colors PINK? REALLY?

If it makes you feel better, I know a few guys who read this story and absolutly love POTO. If it makes you feel better.

If you had not said you were a guy in previous chapters, I would have never guessed. You go into much more detail that i expectedabout the clothes. Next time you want to describe go into greater detail or not at all. you could barely picture the dress anyway, i thought. YOu are doing a pretty good job despite the fact that nothing at all happen in that chapter. Somehow I still enjoyed it.

IF YOU EVER DO ANOTHER STORY DON'T PUT SO MANY GODDAMNED LOLS OUT EVERYTHING! YOU AREN'T REALLY LAUGHING OUT LOUD THAT MUCH SO DON'T WRITE IT. GOD THATS THE MOST FUCKED UP "WORD" IN THE GODDAMNED DICTIONARY!

Hey I'm not a huge fan of Erik not liking darkness. I always think Erik will find the darkness welcoming and peaceful for it was the one of the only things that excepted him (light certainly didn't. And i'm speaking poetically) and it was one of the only things that actually played in his favor. I feel he'll always be worried and insecrue about his face deformities no matter how many times Christine kisses him causing him to hide in the darkness. Well that just my opinion. NIce work on the story so far.

I always pictured Erik's eye more black with gold specks in it. Does it say he has blue eyes? Either way i still love Erik. ( If I have children, if i have a boy, i will name him Erik)

I really like the length of the chapter. I really hate when they're so long it takes you thirty minutues two read them or less than five. I suppose thats all based on the speed of your reading. Anyway your chapter lengths are absolutly perfect. And the story isn't bad either.

I LOVE YOUR USERNAME!

When I saw that you made Eriks hair the sexy black, I was so happy!in these Phan phictions, I like to imagine that's his real hair. He's just so much more sexy,EEEE!thank you thank you thank you! I love this story so much! Please, I hope Erik and christen Both say or think,"how long should we wait before we're one?" that would be epic! Love your stories, love you ( not THAT way, but you know what I mean) you an awesome author! A rose to you! WITH the black ribbon!

Poor rouals older brother.