Dear Redex,

that was an interesting way to begin a story. let me know when you wrote more.i want to now what happens next. it sounds like just what i was lokking for.

I love it.

Aw, i like it! first smut of ShikaTema i ever read, and it was good...

"make her take her hair down"

i get the meaning but it was still a weird thing to think about. hair?

i mean i read about tattoos but never hair. the sun even but hair?

o, yummy... -

Almost makes you wonder if its all just a wild dream of his or real. Well done, definitely a faves. -

Entity, the Keeper and Imanen-sama

Erotically beautiful!

HAHAHAHA! its awsome! continue please! please? ill give you a cokie... but you can have one now too, for a good fic! *hands chocolate chip cookie*

un like me... i like it. very nice and interesting. byby~yuko kimura~

GReat one-shot! I really wish that it was longer, and please write more Naruto fics, mainly with Shikamaru and Temari!-

Nice one! Detailed. I like it. _ V,,

Great one shot! _-

I love it when you write TemaShika fics, cuz there really aren't enough out there. I like, and wish it were longer. I think the dynamic between the two characters is very interesting, and you tapped into that by focusing on a very small aspect of their relationship, which I find fitting for the couple. Keep up the good work!

i love your story. pls write more on shikatema!

Wow...You know..I always supected Shika to have a crush and Temari ..Fruther more,You did a great job,and I like it very it up XD

i like it, its rather sweet, in a way. i like your writing style too