Love this one. I'm hoping that it actually ended up like this for both of them :)

Absolutely beautiful - you captured their relationship so well, with all of its sadness and joy, and the end was incredible - they both finally got what they so richly deserved. A wonderful story!

Excellent work!

That was truly beautiful and amazing. I loved how you described Wesley not believing it was Fred at first, that whole description was so dead on. And their kiss...AW...

Such a seriously sad story and you mentioned tacos? LOL. Nice touch there.

Loved that ending. Had a sort of ominous feeling to it as well. This is already on my favs list!

Keep it up, Erin!;)

OMG! That's so sad and beautiful! You're absoulutely right. We do have very similar writing styles.

It's enticing and I like how you described how Wesley found his "balance".

Loved the ending...into the light he goes! I'm dying to know who it is!;)

This is quite good. Nice ending.

Aw...Very cute...I really like this. Great job. I think that you handled the soul thing very well...I really like this story!

Oh my god, that is so cute. Poor thangs being dead, but it was very good, emotion wise _

Oh, that's cute _

I thought that this was just the sweetest story. im glad they finally get to be together