If you have not forgotten this story then please write more chapters please it's been ten years since the last update.

I hope you get to update this story very soon. It actually very good story and hope to see how you manage to pull it off

Eh, I kinda like Naruto's dry, uncaring attitude. Would Hinata still like him though? I mean, she liked him when he was a loud, clumsy prankster.

:Amused chuckling: Most likely, ha ha! Continue! Plz? :puppy-eyes: -

nice

UPDATE NOW! I read another fic that started out like this and it hadn't even got this far, so please get it to the point where he at least gets the Rei Gun. I myself prefer to saying Spirit Gun though.

Are you going to have any of the Yu yu hakusho episodes have happened? Or are you going to have Naruto do everything that Yusuke did?

LOL UPDATE SON PLEASE

merry xmas

R.I.P.

this story has some potentail to it, also I like how Naruto acts without the mask of blatent stupidity but then again i'm just a jaded and cynical fool anyway i hope to read more of your work soon.

This sound interesting so far. It's pretty original. It fill with minor humor and seriousness. The character emotions are pretty realistic. But I don't think the Hinata's father will actually call Naruto a demon or even said anything mean about him. Since in the canon he clearly knows who or what he is. Even if he doesn't seem to do anything about it but I doubt he will call or said anything bad about him. He seem kind of indifferent about it.

up date the story and you should have hiei and kuwabara and genkai appear and have the same effect on naruto as they did for yuske and you should have the kyuubi be a b class demon and you should have the kyuubi do the samething that kurama did and look exactly like him and you should make it so that itachi has always held back his power and not use anywhere near his full power and to fill sensuis spot and to use his full power when he fights naruto in the demon world and you should make it so thatitachi kills the akutski leader and orochimaru the sound 5 and kabuto, the remaining akutski members garra kankuro temari, all of konoha watch everything in narutos adventures and yu should make it so that all the bad ghost and halfas fom danny phantom and sam jazz tucker maddie jackand valerie and all the good guys and bad guys in xiaolin showdown from season 3 exept evil guan and good chase and good jack watch all of narutos adventures

Interesting story, but you copied word after word from the Yu Yu Hakusho manga! Will this be an original plot?

update

hey this is a great chapter i cant wait to read what will happen next please update soon. also if the egg does become and evil creature is it going to be kyuubi that is the monster because that would be so cool to read if that where the case well anyways please update soon