this was really good and insightful.

Okay, I'm officially addicted to your writing, now-you don't happen to have any books..? Had to ask. Wonderful fic. God, I love Carson. And you write him so well!

Aww! So sweet :) nice little fic :) good job.

-Miyth

I love this. Carson's voice especially is perfect. And I always love Carson and Teyla interaction.

I love this tag. It fleshed out what we saw on screen beautifully.

Good job! You captured the characters perfectly! :D

AL

not bad, seemingly pointlessm except for the "all sales final bit" not sure I felt the need for the story . . . but nothing in whole truely worng with it.

Hey, this is nice. 'No refunds' good old Carson. This was very real and sweet.

I hope they go into her telepathic ability more in season 2. This was a really good story and I like reading stories where there's a lot of Teyla/Beckett interaction. It doesn't have to be romantic just them talking are really good scenes. Beckett is one of my favorite characters. You did an awesome job on this!

Donna Lynn

Good one, it was nice and it kept with a more credible Teyla. She has fears too. Anyway, keep up the good work!

Nice follow-up to Teyla's thoughts after all she went through in the gift. Talking to Carson beats Kate any day.

I love this story is there more if there is i would like to know becouse i love it

Potterfan2006

I really liked this. Nice Teyla POV after that episode. She must definitely be disturbed with her abilities, but I'm glad her chat with Carson had her seeing that it could be a positive thing as well. Can't return it, might as well put it to good use :). Great job as usual.