My god you write them annoying. Rambling idiots. Just have them talk like normal human beings for christ's sake. Stop with the utterly unrealistic miscommunication for the sake of plot. Write an actual plot.

Looking at the updated date, the chances of you posting more chapters are highly unlikely. But I've just finished watching all 7 seasons within a matter of days and gone on a raging fic hunt for quality Gilmore Girl goodness, and your post-S5 fic is one the best portrayals of the show and it's wonderful characters that I've come across. I hope that one day, while you're sitting around doing who knows what, your muse decides to come back and whack you over the head because until that day, I'll be kept up at night with dreams of more chapters.

why aren't you updating this story anymore? it's so awesome! I don't want to sound harsh, but you're wasting a great story that is very well written!

your new fan,

e.

Sorry I took so long to review, but I'm reviewing now. Anyway I was talking about in your fic when I said I was suprised no one questioned her about not knowing where Luke was. I was comparing it to the fact that they put up those stupid ribbons before they broke up so I was suprised they didn't say anything in your fic about her not knowing where he is. With them they might overreact and start putting ribbons all over town again.

There talk at with Lorelai walking Luke up was so cute, and so was the one where Luke woke up Lorelai. Both were really good. Of course Luke does snore,(3.17-A Tale of Poes and Fire.), but I'm willing to overlook that one minor detail.

Lots of angst at the end towards the end of this chapter. I love it. Glad Lorelai decided to comfort her too. The whole things was great and I hope you haven't given up on this.

~Adios~

~Epona~

I love this story. I especially appreciate the fact it didn't take you several months to get Rory to come to her senses. Please, please, please update soon!

Jesus Christ Muffin Is Injured sure likes to read her own words.

i love it so far is it done or is there more?

I. Are. Baboon.

Dirty.

I LOVE it. Too much angst though. But hey, it's OK.

Anyway. Thank you for the really long review. It made me feel very happy, even though half of it was about Degrassi, but even so thank you!

Short, yes. I apologize. Chapter 8 (which will be up Thursday) is seven pages long (according to my computer.) But if it makes you feel any better, I have written chapters that are 10 PAGES LONG! But those are in the chapters 13-16 region. I have written up to Chapter 22.

All right, well, I shall let you go!

Oh woah woah woah! *music playing* Oh baby! *Hanna croons off-keyedly*

You know, I'm not even quite sure why I'm singing. But seriously, the second I pressed the review button I started to sing and OH MY GOD what is wrong with my right hand. It doesn't want to type. It keeps curling up. I am a young teenager, for God's sakes, why am I getting what appears to be arthritis or curly-finger-syndrome, more commonly known as CFS and yes, it IS a proper medical term, and look at me, using the word proper, my Britishness is fighting my Americaness and has temporarily won the fighting battle and now I'm feeling extreme deja vu from my last review to you which involved me ranting about hitting my head on a tampon machine and hey, my right hand isn't even acting weird again, so

there we go, it's all good.

I am not back in LA, no, I'm still in England, because I leave in 5 days on the 17th, and I've just realized that you probably didn't know I lived in LA in the first place so it was pretty pointless me mentioning it. For all you know, I could've been living in Zanzabar or Alaska or the North Pole. But they don't have great internet access in the North Pole, I've heard. Well, anyway, now you know.

Hmm, so, chapter six huh? Fan-TAS-tic. Very angsty, yes, but seems to be a good angst. This is a very interesting point of view towards Rory's predicament. She doesn't really want it? Agh, but WHY so suddenly, silly girl? Oh well, who knows what's going on inside that girl's head, besides ASP, of course.

Oh, and I just rememebered that Luke and Lorelai are engaged! Woohoo! Heh, whenever I say woohoo, I want to keep going and say, That's wonderful! I'm thrilled! Well, woohoo! Hold on, I'm going to cartwheel. But all Emily sarcasm aside, WOOHOO! Going to the chapel and they're gona get ma-a-arried! And here I go with the singing again. This is a REVIEW, not a MUSICAL. 'Oy with the singing already, self,' she reprimands herself firmly.

Hmm, so. The one letdown about long chapters is you forget what happened in the beginning. But then, of course, you get to scroll back up and relive the amusement, so I guess that's not too bad.

Ooh, I was just reading what you said to bloodymary2. And I quote, " I love writing and I love getting reviews, especially positive ones (what kind of hack enjoys being negatively criticized?)" Um. *looks around sheepishly and raises hand* Well, no, not really, I'm exagerrating. There was just this one review I got from a person called Casper... God, I was laughing just now even copying and pasting it...

"Oh my God, are you still not getting it? Cut the damn A/Ns! They're annoying. And no, I didn't report you, I just can't understand what's so important about thanking your "fans" that you have to do it at the beginning of every. damn. chapter.

Write them an email or just put the A/Ns at the end, for heaven's sake! Or tell them so at Fanforum, that's were they're all from, anyway.

Oh well, I guess you just wanna waste your talent and don't care that many people aren't gonna read a story where they have to scroll through half a chapter to get to the beginning of the story. Fine by me, I'm out."

I seriously have NO idea, but for some reason, I find this HILARIOUS. Every single time I read it, I crack up laughing. Why? I don't know. I'm even laughing now writing about it. Hold on, I want to read it again. * HA! My God. It's so funny. It just is. AREN'T YOU GETTING IT? Ha. It's like, because this one person doesn't like them, they ask me to delete them, and I don't pay attention because everyone else (mostly) likes them, including me, and they act like I didn't hear them. HELLO, I WANT YOU TO CUT THEM AND YOU HAVEN'T! Ha. And the dramatic finish? "I'm out." I was crying with laughter. Ah, to be as crazy as I am that severe criticism is a source of continual amusement.

Hmm, anyways, back to you, huh? Oh, by the way, I absolutely love your review for Holiday. Sorry about your teddy's nose. I are Baboon is obnoxious, gah. The line “I thought we went over this already, Luke. I’m not annoying; I’m witty, charming, beautiful, with an attractive bosom and extraordinarily great-smelling hair. I’m also very modest and only know these things because my humble escort spends his days staring at my picture and repeating them.” really amuses me, which is a good thing. But it's not the kind of amusement I get from Casper's review (OH CAPSER!), it's the other kind. You know, the kind normal people get. When reading something amsuing. That kind.

Ha, world, Luke has weird sinuses. I think I might stand on the top of a building and yell that to everyone one day. Ooh, and Luke is insecure about her past travelling idea- does this mean this will come up at a later date? Perhaps, people don't foreshadow in stories for nothing. Unless, you know, they do.

I'm just going to interject myself to tell you to find a decent, comfortable chair, because you'll be getting so many lapdances from me that your butt will probably go numb from sitting. God, don't you hate that? I had to sit in a car for 6 hours with only one brief stop and ah when I stretched, I tingled. And my butt was so numb, I had to resist the urge to squeeze it to put life back in it, because I was in public, and it would create many weird questions I rather wouldn't answer. So, anyway, you'd better have a good chair.

I wanted to splutter out my OWN coffee when I saw it was Chris calling. That would have been slightly problematic, because, one, as I am on the computer, the coffee would go straight into my cousin's keyboard and ruin it, and, two, I'm not drinking coffee. I guess the second problem is a little more serious.

Love the ring tone.

I also am liking the slightly deep, angsty bits you put it. One line i liked went AS followed: "Lorelai was infamous for not directly facing her problems; in fact, she tended to avoid them. Despite her showy confidence and wit and sharp-mindedness. This made her a tiny bit hypocritical, she knew." Not sure why, maybe because it also reminds me of myself- yet another way I'm kinda similar to Lorelai, but oh well. And, of course, the Rory-Lorelai screaming match. Always fun.

You're so great that I'm going to rent the seven dwarves off of Rory and have my own communal jig in your honor. There will, of course, be lapdances, and food. Hmm, maybe we can get the dwarves to give each other lapdances. That'd be EXTREMELY awkwards in a strangely amusing way. Or maybe it would just be extremely awkward. I don't know, I've never been in that situation before. Perhaps someone who has can tell us.

I don't know about them, but my kitchen cupboard is an amazing ventriloquist. As it's a bit rebellious, it's gotten me in trouble plenty of times, making it sound like I'm telling people dirty things when I'm not. Ah, but you gotta love a kitchen cupboard with spunk. You just have to.

I miss Candid Camera. Whatever happened to it? Do you remember that one where the guy was in a bathroom with alot of sinks and whenever he went to one, a different one would turn on, and when he went to that, another would turn on, and so forth? At the end he was trying to TRICK the sinks. It was very amusing.

Well, I guess I better be going. It's 3 18 PM here, which means- wow, I was just about to give you the time where I live, but then I remember you probably don't live in the same timezone, so who knows? Well, it's 8 hours ahead of California, anyway. Well, the point of the sentence, before I veered off, was going to be: It's 3 18 PM here, and I haven't eaten anything all day except a mini Scotch pancake. So, now you know. Keep updating. Even though I get back the 17th, I'm moving and crap so I won't be able to get online too much...anyways.

Woah. What are the other Gilmorish R Words? I have just glanced at your title and I realized I do not know the second half's point. Does anyone? Do you even? Am I underestimating you? Am I overestimating my own wit? Am I estimating the answer to the equation 4x(squared) 6y(cubed)?

My sister is playing foriegn music upstairs to my cousin, and right now it's this weird Japanese one that starts, 'eet's so eezy, happy-go-lucky' and proceeds to say YATTA! YATTA! repeatedly, whatever that means. This seems like a signal telling me I should stop reviewing. I knew you'd understand. I can't defy the logic of the signal.

And so, I remain,

Your faithful servant,

Hanna

I love saying that. It's so fun. Don't you love the good old Pride and Prejudice days where they signed letters like that?

Um... ooh! I know, I'll give you some fishsticks, and some lapdances, and THEN, I'll give a fishstick a lapdance! How's that, huh? Huh? That's what I call real gratification.

Nice work. I hope you update soon.

Awesome I love it! It's great Rory came to Lorelai although it seems very hard for her. Have you heard that the fight between Lorelai and Rory will keep on for half a season? Do you believe that?

You. Slay.

Me. Enjoy.

Beg. Continue.

Thank. You.

another wonderful chapter...i dont think there was too much angst...but what do i know...anyways..i'm addicted so please update...soon!

~!*a*!~

contrary to what u said, that was a great chapter and the author notes were just the icing on the cake!

~!*a*!~

bleh... don't feel like logging in...

first order of business: thank you for the comment. yes, i do realize that i just blew a hole the size of lorelai's ego (haha) in the space-time continum (have no idea if i spelled that right). and i see the OC being around for a very long time... and i completely forgot that adam had a role on gilmore girls and that he played dave, so my solution is this: they're identical cousins... maybe even the male version of the doublemint twins. not creative, i know... but i'm tired. and in serious need of coffee.

second order of business: love it, love it, love the story! that is my life: ranting, silence, then more ranting. so i love it, love it, love it. now i think i'll go to chapter 2.

F-O-M