This should be suckura. Yes tenten might have crushed on guys but she wasn't a leech like suckura us with sasgay!

Child did u even watch..

The true relationship between Neji and TenTen? Seriously? Have you watched the anime? There are clearly little gestures shown between the two that shows they have some feelings towards eachother. And TenTen is not the type of girl to kiss any ass even if it's Neji. Unlike Ino, Sakura and Hinata she was the only girl out of the group that didn't outwardly act giddy or confess her feelings to a guy. These are just my observations. We are all entitled to our own opinions. Your story did make me laugh though. However I can see this situation taking place more between Sakura and Sasuke.

Lmfao! I thought I was reading a good crackfic until I read your AN. That just made this story an even bigger joke. XD Well...thanks for making me laugh.

Wow this sucks don't make a story if your going to bash characters make something tragically beautiful not scornfully stupid like you did. Don't ever write something like this again. This is one of the worst stories I've ever read.

So funny, and I loved it! 3

As much as I like nejiten I admit this story made me laugh...a little then I was like wtf so out of character. My question is why make a story bashing a certain pairing if you don't like it in the first place? And the thing Idont understand is why people who don't like the pairing judge people who do? Like seriously I will not go "die" because I like the pairing...and ****SPOILER ALERT*** neji is dead! Who gives a flying fuck what you think anymore? That is all. Good day.

You are pathetic. What are you, 5 years old? ''I don't like that pairing so I'll ruin it by humiliating Tenten" ? God you sucks ! At least try to put them in character! What you just did is like ruining the manga. That was lame, bad written, ooc... well, very pitiful. Next time, just restrain yourself. Ugh.

It's kinda oc she is acting like Sakura chasing Sasuke.

I really like the Neji tenten pairing but this probly was quite realistic before the chunin exams

I was really hoping she would kill him.

I don't think it's fair that people are flaming you. I actually really like Tenten (she's pretty cool with her weapons and she looks okay, at least), but everyone has their own views.

Sure, I thought Tenten's character was a little overexaggerated, but Tenten really has no character depth. She's just a background character, and she's free for FF writers to play with.

This story isn't exactly my cup of tea since I like Neji and Tenten and you made Neji a cold-hearted jerk and Tenten an annoying fangirl (;]... a little embarrassed for her... ahaha), but it was certainly interesting. Keep writing!

Noooooo! Neji is such a jerk! How could this be? This story is so sad! It makes me want to cry! How could it be labeled humor? T-T

sorry to b harsh but i give this on 3/10*s. it's just not workin for me.

Awww.. poor Tenten :( ahaha but neji's right XD love your story :)