Kel/Dom, definitively.

I loved the part about Peachblossom! great story and great chapter!

BRILLIANT! all of these chapters are excellent. entertaining, funny (loved alanna and the green knights business!) and very fluffy. especially loved kel and doms wedding. (mesucker for KD) have literally just read all 11 chapters in one go, so you can imagine how long it took me :S but it was WORTH IT! well done :)

I was stifling grins and laughter the entire time! What about Yuki/Neal or Raold/Shinkokami or even better Thayet/Jon? Great job!

That was funny. I liked the thing with the gay knight, that cracked me up.

Hmm... Buri and Raoul... they'd want something private... maybe they can elope! No, they can't elope, it would ruin the story and my breakfast (cantelope! Get it?). Well, I'm sure someone can figure out something.

so cute

ok i loved it but kel in first test and pege made a point to wear dresses to dinner and whenever she wasn't in her uniform so i thought you should know that YOUR kle is unlike the real kel in that way

GOD STORY

that was a really good chapter, update soon!

hi im respondin 2 ur pole i kno im a bit l8 KEL AND DOM PLS!

im on chappy 2 and i love it i only have a few constructive critismsums (4giv ma bad spellin) bak den it woz called a hen's night not a bachaloret party and there was no such thing as a stripper and the record player hadnt been invented 4 at least 150 years

Love it so far!

i think this chapter was better than the first. Im just not sure if they would have strippers in that tym.. or in Tortall.. lol but it adds something tot he story...it works even though it is a bit unrealistic...lol

I love where you are going with this. Please, please write more as I need something to keep me going! :)

aw that was soo sweet and so soo soo soo good... I loved it... numair and daine were so perfect and in character it was amazing.. good job.. and update soon

Caiti

(It's AnimalWriter1, I just changed my penname.)

Hey you updated! This was both funny and sweet, especially some particular lines. Overall this was a great chapter!

For the firstb chap of Buri and Raoul's wedding, perhaps you could have Buri remembering the times when she was falling in love with Raoul and he hardly noticed until one particular moment...Like maybe he goes to speak with her and she's writing in a letter to him, mumbling about what to say... The scene cpuld go like:

"Dear Raoul...no!" "Raoul I have something I would like to... not that either! Buri scribbled on the parchment, several more attempts crumpled on the desk around her.

Raoul stood outside the door, she had asked him to come earlier and he had come a little earlier then expected. Curious at Buri's muffled mumbling, Raoul opened the door. "Was there something you'd like to discuss Buri?"

Buri turned in her chair, accidentally spattering ink on her desk. Buri ducked her head and stood to clean up the mess, glad that the semi-darkened room hid her blush. "I-yes there was..."-her mind scrambled for an excuse. "I was wondering if-"

Raoul frowned, "What is it Buri?"

Buri sighed, "Raoul...IthinkIloveyou" she said it in such a hurry that Raoul didn't have time to figure out what she had just said, before she rushed out the door, intending to talk with Thayet about these strange feelings she had with a fellow commander.

That could get somewhere...You can use it or scrap it whatever, just to get ideas going.

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